Great novel. Who knew that the mc would start cultivating due to a light novel? This is a different take on how cultivation would start, I'm definitely hooked on it!
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Gila keren banget ceritanya benaran dibuat sangat baik, sampai ada peta yang menjelaskan, buat ceritanya jadi lebih hidup. ceritanya sangat bagus. i like it
Right of the bat we start off with a tournament that took 40+ chapters, skipp...............................................................
top tier novel just fix translation mistakes
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Wasted potential.
Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5.
Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5.
In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work
Very well written and characterized! Reading through the first five chapters definitely whetted my appetite to find out what's going to happen to Alex. I can feel the complexity of his situation quite well, and when the status quo gets upset, I'm looking forward to being there for the dragon-ride. [img=recommend]
This story is absolutely amazing and one of the best bleach works out there though the only problem is how it’s updateds are inconsistent but as the author said he dose this to pass the time so can’t really complain about it. Keep up the good work??????
Here's my one true complaint about this work: the story doesn't seem to have anything in common with the title. They are nearly completely unrelated. Title says he has a cultivation world. With this type of novel, that would mean he owned a world, possibly a small or inner world. He would also likely be the only "human" or sentient being with access to it. Basically, it would be completely his domain. This one in the story? It's anything except that. Up to the point I stopped reading, it seemed more like a planet located in a distant part of the same universe, and practically crawling with a Cultivator..."infestation" (heh! just kidding.) Anyway, he merely teleportation there. He doesn't own it, from what I could see.
Started off pretty interesting to say the least. However, it’s another story where the author interprets dark themes meaning mass sexual assault of women… it’s not an interesting plot point, and quite obviously not enjoyable and yet the descriptions of the actions are decently in detail as if I’m supposed to enjoy it. Within like 5 ch you get introduced to one of the new harem members and the noble that is famous for kidnapping women, physically abusing and assaulting them with vivid detail on how he forces them to use their mouths before tossing them aside. How he wants his servant to go get the husband and brother out of the dungeon so that they are forced to watch…The women of the story are pretty well thought out, but the rest of the story will give me some new form of ptsd at this rateAre you alright author?
Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars.I would love any feedback you guys can give as this is my first real original novel. Also, feel free to ask any questions about the story here!