As of Chapter 151, our sect has 88 members, mostly skilled players, with a few exceptional talents in specific game genres. Some excel at Minecraft construction, others in racing, and some even lead guilds. Even those not named are dedicated gamers, clocking in 8 hours daily. These disciples demonstrate competence, often transcending their realm, thanks to the resurrection mechanic and strategic thinking within a wuxia context.
Initially, I underestimated the players' intelligence from the summary, but they've proven me wrong with their creative ideas, like consuming poison to defeat demons or refining resources for better items. They've even improved cultivation methods through specialization.
However, there are a few issues:
1. Terminology can be confusing. The novel uses unconventional abbreviations like "W" for 10,000 or "300W" for 3 million, which may confuse non-native readers. A more standard notation like "K" (thousand) would be clearer. Additionally, the phrase "hold the grass" is repeatedly used without a clear meaning, despite numerous attempts to decipher it.
2. Repetition becomes tiresome, particularly with overused phrases like "hold the grass" and excessive anime references. While initially amusing, these elements lose their novelty after numerous occurrences.
3. Quality deteriorates significantly after Chapter 25, with nonsensical sentences and subpar editing. This decline justified my lower rating, as later chapters resemble machine-translated content.
In conclusion, while the novel's humor and unique gameplay dynamics earn it a 4.2-star rating, the translation and editing quality drop it to a 3.5/5. I'd suggest giving it a try, but if poor grammar bothers you, it might not be the most enjoyable read.
The author does an impressive job with One Piece lore, skillfully intertwining their narrative with the show's events and filling in gaps with subtle details. It's a fascinating read, especially for dedicated fans. However, the translation could use some polishing, as there are occasional repetitions of sentences with slightly altered versions, and a few errors in word choice. For instance, character names are inconsistently translated, such as Hina being referred to as Tina and then back to Hina again – these are simple fixes that would significantly improve the readability.
The system in the story is somewhat inconsistent and underutilized. Instead of relying heavily on god-like card abilities, the protagonist focuses on training to gain strength. While this approach is acceptable, it feels incongruous for a novel titled "Super Card System" when the system is introduced extensively in the early chapters but becomes largely irrelevant later on. An example would be a new card drawn in Chapter 120; its statistics and abilities aren't disclosed until Chapter 140, where the protagonist simply equips it and uses its powers as needed, which can be confusing.
This novel is truly remarkable, but unfortunately, the translation doesn't fully capture its essence. The dialogue seems funnier and more coherent when read in its original language. The interactions between the main character (MC) and the male lead (ML) are hilarious and heartwarming; I adore their chemistry. However, there's a spoiler I'd like to mention: when MC and ML scored 1 and 2 on their exam, the class's quick acceptance of this unexpected result feels somewhat unrealistic to me.
This truly stands as my all-time favorite novel, and my beloved author! (Full translation from Chinese)
This story transcends the popularity of many works, particularly those by MXTX and Erha. The world, plot, and even minor characters, initially appearing as mere dungeon backdrop, are astonishingly well-crafted. Characters' names are crucial, as they recur often, evoking emotions that linger.
The pacing might initially seem confusing, convoluted, and unnecessary, but it all comes together beautifully in the end. Each character, including seemingly insignificant NPCs, has a purpose, contributes to the plot, and forms unexpected relationships. The main couple's development is thought-provoking, and their story unfolds later, leaving readers eager for re-reads.
Ignore those who claim unequal treatment – they simply haven't finished the book! The narrative structure might seem uneven, with Jiang Fang's tale preceding Nan Zhou's, but the latter's complexity and intrigue far surpass expectations. Both characters' personalities and stories are extraordinary, and the author delves deep into their nuances, revealing their layers and vulnerabilities.
What impresses me most is the intricate world-building, far beyond a simple game narrative. As the story progresses, it surprises with depth and richness.
The best part, alas, unfolds after Chapter 200, where the final arcs deliver breathtaking moments that leave me speechless, with multiple instances of "OMG, this can't get any better!" Reading it feels like savoring a fine wine.
Not everyone might reach the climax, but the journey is undeniably rewarding. I wholeheartedly recommend this novel. My apologies for any language errors, but my enthusiasm is genuine – I've been so captivated by this story that I've stayed up late for days, just reading and reading (><).
This novel has truly stolen my heart!
Thanks for the recommendation..
The narrative is leisurely-paced but engaging overall. However, there are a few instances where the storyline drags slightly, and the conclusion feels rushed in comparison to the book's initial慢节奏. Despite that, I'm still giving it a full 5 out of 5 rating because I found it enjoyable and it served as an effective distraction for almost three days, allowing me to finish it. The translation into MTL (Machine Translation) is decent, although the character names can be somewhat bewildering. If you're impatient for the translated version, I'd recommend it, as the group doing the translation does a commendable job.
The book genuinely exceeded my expectations, as I had not预见它会有如此高的质量。前15章节通过生动描绘角色的性格和特质，成功营造出一个不那么机械的世界。尽管是以复仇为主题，但故事并未止步于此，因为主角在力量上远超反派，这使得角色之间的互动、成长以及力量提升成为小说的一大亮点。整个故事似乎暗示着，真正的幸福源于朋友的陪伴和自我认知的深化之旅。
I see so there was such an explanation huh
Damn who do you think you are loll. . . stating fact. . . nah your just trying to influence people to not read this. . . you may think this is garbage but i think your comment is garbage. . .
HEy guys don't be influenced by this guy comment . . . read it and make your own opinion of it. . .
I don’t get why there are so many comments about crying. The only thing I felt was occasional laughter. There is nothing abusive here. Yes according to the gong it’s abuse, but the victim seriously planned this. It’s just a play to him. There’s no actual abuse to him, just a game. If the victim is so cold and playful here then how is it abuse?
Imagine if the cubs finally reach their adulthood and shifts to humanoid form, Our MC Xie Tao who was usually sorrounded by bunch of cutie cubs to hotty daddies real quick:3
Too boring, I'm on 100+ no exciting thing happened. I don't know what will happen in the future chapter but I'm dropping this.