Wow, that's a lot of chapters for free, I'll wait to accumulate more chapters to start reading (about 200 chapters) and after reading I'll delete this review and make another one to talk about what i read in the novel. I noticed that it's pretty empty here so consider this review my support, Good luck on your journey as an author ??
Have to ? but I definitely feel my writing has improved, but is also far from perfect. Just know, I am trying my best to create a great story for you to read :)Thank you so much for checking it out, and if you like it, please add it to collections and add a review. Heck. Leave a review even if you don’t, just let me know why so I could possibly fix it ?Despite my triggers, I will let you know, as one of my chapters say- no bad deed goes unpunished. ?
this book is awesome ???????keep it up author
Never! Never!
The Nurseperson push me, and come nearly to the Doctor and said. "This is your new patient Doc."
"No, I'm afraid not"
IS TWO golden pistol i bought 2 straight away i feels connections whit them and i wanted shoot someting i see some practice room there i run off there and i shoot at practice target !BANG BANG BANG BANG i empyied both magazines so quickly it only hold 7 bullet each but that was not importent all 14 shots were bullseye it felt like those guns were my hands i can weild em quite easily i was excited i come out of white space seems like my body just sits there and seemed in deep tought well thats dangerous when i go white space il go to safe place hmmm what i do now hmm shall i go hero or villain or antihero hmm but becoming hero will be annoying and i dont want keep fighting i just wanna easy rich life i could do all i want so il go mobster and gain terrority and go legal while running mobsters so i could live like King whit my guns aim i bet there is almost no one can make me run for my life heheheh and there is white space too hahah this shit is so easy now i need arm my goons but i only have 200 how do i arm them give all 17 of them cheap knifes nah il get atleast them pistols and body armors just in case shall i rob a bank since there is only police now hmm nah bank is too hard how bout small shops yes that will do heheas i thinks my hideous unhuman plan whit glee i didnt notice i was giggling some time to time this freaked out orphans around me as i stands up and see trough crowd i see 2 tall guy Felix Joy u two come whit me as i yell and goes forward van they silently follows me as we go few street down there to see store quiet big one but this one is owned by Bradly family so no hard feeling since i plan to elimimate all off them since they were just medium sized family as we go around parks car
3 more minutes passed; Traey Rin's eyes lit up, shining with excitement, and the corners of his lips rose, forming a wide smile on his face. "Finally!" he couldn't help but shout out, and a series of notification messages flashed in front of him.
The apex in this forest was an owl who live on the biggest tree. That was awfully helpful in fact the price wasn't fair since they would be discovered anyway if he and Beatrice saw an owl they would run and spend no time to wonder whether they are going to fight the King or not.
Your's lovingly,
"Apakah kau yakin?" tanya Chang min
Let me just say this straight: the stakes in this story are personal, domestic, and absolutely brutal. There are no armies marching or kingdoms at war—but the consequences of losing here are just as devastating. Yun Mu Jing's stakes are existential. She's the legitimate eldest miss of the General's Mansion, and everything is being systematically stripped from her. Her status as first daughter is already diminished—she's now the 'second miss.' Her living conditions are deliberately inferior. Her reputation is about to be destroyed by a fabricated scandal involving Prince Yu. Her engagement to the Crown Prince is being undermined by her own sister. If Si Yu's plan succeeds, Mu Jing won't just lose her home—she'll be married off to a womanizer as a way to contain the 'damage,' and she'll have no voice in any of it. Mo Han Zhao's stakes are moral. He's the Crown Prince, the most powerful man in the room, and he's been complicit in Mu Jing's suffering through silence and inaction. His conflict isn't external—it's the growing realization that he's the villain in someone else's story. The text makes this explicit when he thinks about how 'truly despicable' he feels. But here's the thing: feeling despicable doesn't change anything. That's the tension. Will he act, or will he just feel bad and send a servant with some fabric? Si Yu's stakes are survival. She knows, deep down, that her position as favored daughter is built on a lie. Mu Jing is the real blood heir. If Mu Jing fights back effectively, Si Yu loses everything—her status, her engagement, her family's love. That's why she has to destroy Mu Jing first. It's not just cruelty; it's self-preservation. The suspense is maintained because we know Si Yu is winning. Mu Jing hasn't fought back once. She's been patient, obedient, silent. And the reader is screaming at the page. That's effective conflict management—the tension comes from waiting for the other shoe to drop.