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the mc is too arrogant for my taste, I mean he can be arrogant of he has strength but he literally provoke the alchemist in chap 4 if it wasn't for plot armor he's already dead.
oh well it's not my cup of tea but I'll still give a 3star cuz I only read four chap maybe it will be better in a few chap.
One of the best trial so far; great premise and good story development. MC started off with a better and logical background which is plus itself.
Writing Quality ★ ★ ★
• Though the story is great some words are jumbled or are connected with each other example: (after,hedied)(let go.He run) and some words that aren't good with eah other or a little bit confusing.
Story Development ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
•Though it has a similar system as some novel here which has like collecting EXP; it has different story to it which isn't a copy paste of other novels. The MC started of from the bottom and is continuously rising through his EXP collecting. Though there are some clichés it isn't to the point that it's on every chapter.
Character Design ★ ★ ★ ★
•MC's quite smart (surprisingly) and is rational to what he's doing (surprisingly). He's not lazy and is very hard-working due to his EXP colllecting system, not like the other MC with system that always complains like a child who always wanted to be spoonfed. Anyway, MC is calculative with his move, though he has poor roots and vitality, he still compensate it with his EXP collections.
Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
•No comment here
World Background ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
•It's the average xianxia/xuanhuan world building where it started off from a small town to a bigger sect to another country. That's every chinese xianxia/xuanhuan in a nutshell. But, I applaud the author for integrating newer sects and not using generic sects.
Overall 4.4, though this may change in the future.
why no updates since 2 months?Is there any way to bring back translation of this novel and continue to update it?
Like the story it's pretty good and I love how the cover picture is a Magic the Gathering card.
I dont know what else to write to reach 140.
i just wanna say, "amazing and fantastic." i like the story about video game, from zero to hero and the story combine with fantasy and a little bit scifi.
Great story, great writing, great originality, great characters, great development... Basically great everything.
The only flaw - then only thing I'm unhappy about - the only thing that's not great (lol), is the lack of release schedule...
Don't get me wrong, I would love it if 2-10 chapters were released every day... that would be great!
BUT, I understand that the author has a life. And I understand that the reason the writing and everything is so good, is because the author takes their time to write it rather than forcing themselves to crank out a chapter every day - So I can live with there being a fair while between releases.
BUT, I wish there was a schedule... For example, releasing a chapter every month on a set day (though two per month would be better!)...
It's just that without a schedule and with so long between releases, I check for a new release every day... Often multiple times per day (pathetic, I know, but I really love this story!) And I spend the whole time worrying it's been dropped! :'(
But if there were a schedule, I wouldn't get my hopes up every day and I wouldn't have to worry about it being dropped unless a scheduled release date was missed.
So Author, if you're reading this & haven't dropped it (Please don't drop it! But if you have, please let us know so I can stop worrying & hoping!), you should consider a schedule.
Thanks for everything.
Cheers, Guy.
This is one of the best novels on this platform. I can say that only after reading 30 chapters. But I'm unhappy with the author as he didn't upload a single chapter for4 months.
Common man. Just takes 30 to 40 min to write a thousand words. Go on, at least write some chapters and I will definitely repost my review with 5star
I really love this story
Writer here, comment down below, need some criticism so I can improve my writing. Who knows maybe, you guys out there can help me become a better writer in the future
started pretty good but is losing momentum in the past 50 chapters. (reviewing this at chapters 140).
The pace slowed down to a snail and author spend several chapters to write about daily life of mc (in novel time, not even a week went by in the past 60 chapters).
and it's not even a high intensity arc. mc is just stopping by in a town, reading books and flirting around.
I will give this a shot again when more chapters are release but I seriously hope author picks up the pace where the story moves forward each chapter. right now I feel like I can skip 10 chapters without missing anything relevant in the story.
You gotta tell me what happens instiry since it’s killing me did she or not cheat. how does he found out about it