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it is a good book i highly recommend to all
The world building and story line may be good, but what i call BS is at start MC starts reading the books so he should know everything, and now chapter 80 or something there is book or legend he doesnt know? nope, denied.
Before we get to the main part of my review, here’s the cliff notes:You should definitely read this story, it’s so good! The characters are dynamic and lovable. The world is well thought out and developed. The action is balanced out nicely with some lightheartedness and the system isn’t overbearing. (The story can also be strangely educational at times) There, now for the heart of the review. The characters are dynamic and a lot of fun to read about. While Rex doesn’t really have much of a friend group to begin with it’s quick to develop and it’s fun watching the people around him slowly being drawn in. Whether that be as friends, friendly and not so friendly rivals, or enemies. I appreciate the range of characters. It’s not just the main character, the best friend, and the love interest. The side characters aren’t forgotten about either and we get interactions with them as well. They each have personality and I can’t help but look forward to seeing more in the future. The world itself is well developed and unique. Well, as unique as any story taking place in the modern world, but with magic and monsters. Not to down grade this in any way. You don’t find a lot of stories that take a more military approach to these things. The author has done a good job at fleshing out the dynamics of a military base and how that would operate in a world with super powered people. From who would join, how they would recruit people to even the funding and political powers. These are all presented in an easy to digest manner, naturally given to the reader without an overbearing info dump. This novel also has a good balance between action and drama. I caught myself laughing at the end of ch 47 from the sudden switch from military espionage to school drama. It was a smooth switch and felt appropriate for the moment, but still had me laughing. Every author has a different way to balance these things, different ratios between the different aspects of a story, and a lot of it just comes down to personal preference. In my opinion this story has a great balance. We have a slightly heavier focus on the training and action, but the social aspect isn’t overlooked and it definitely isn’t inconsequential either.Finally I’ll go over the system. As someone who has been burnt out on the system troupe, I find this to be one of the better ones. Often times systems are repetitive and predictable, a lazy man’s way to move a story forward. Rex on the other hand, has actual interactions with people that promote the story. His growth and the information he gathers mainly come from his actions and interactions with the people around him, not from a system. The system itself seems to be used more as a guide, a basic system function without extra bells and whistles. Rex’s abilities don’t seem to be tied to the system either. While they are earned through leveling up and the like, it’s not like he has to use the system to use his abilities, they are a part of him. The system simply displays and explains it doesn’t enable. He’s not running around calling out his special move or looking at a shop purchasing abilities. I appreciate this approach to a system, it’s not heavy handed. It adds to the story and doesn’t take anything away. Of course I’ll always be a little bit apprehensive, but so far so good. A quick side note is the type of system, the Werepanther System. Being a werepanther isn’t strictly flavor for the story. There are actual changes Rex experiences that aren’t just for show. With his strength there is weakness. A promise of potential consequences and I look forward to seeing more. Over all the story is good! Definitely give it a read. I don’t go around writing reviews just for fun ?
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It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.
amazing story' i like Aryan characters and Rudra
Let me guess. You saw the word Valkyrie and Smash and thought of either A. Super Smash Bros or B. Smashing Valkyries to make Lemonade right? Well we both know we came here for the lemons but that's not what you want to know right? Is this novel worth reading? I'd say yes. Here's a more detailed review.After reading the first volume or the equivalent of 140ish chapters I have to say the novel grew on me. Sam our smart horn dog of a MC is rather interesting. He's not strong and neither is he brave starting out. But seeing this lifeless husk of a man slowly grow while somehow getting a harem has been a rather fun read. The world building I should add is rather interesting as well. I won't deny I came here for the lemons but stayed to see how the lemonade was made. And I gotta say it was a ride. Personal Score 8.0/10 Would recommend to lemon lovers only.
A very interesting read. Chapter one was an attention grabber, two was an eye opener and throughout the book so far it is filled with wonderful drama.I hope to see more from this author as the book progresses.
Review:Writing Quality: 5/5The writing is of exceptional quality, showing clear attention to detail and a strong command of language.Stability of Updates: 3/5Updates are somewhat inconsistent, with room for improvement in maintaining a regular update schedule.Story Development: 5/5The story develops seamlessly, with well-crafted plot progression that keeps the reader engaged.Character Design: 4/5Characters are well-developed and compelling, though there may be some minor areas for enhancement.World Background: 5/5The world-building is rich and immersive, creating a vivid and believable setting for the story.Overall Rating: 4.6/5This is a highly recommended read, with outstanding writing quality, strong story development, and an engaging world, despite some inconsistencies in update frequency.
extremely emotional writing. this was a Rollercoaster the intensity is almost too much ! this authors flow is fantastic addictive even.
Keep in mind, I'm an extremely harsh critic, due to the massive amounts of novels I read. From the first sixteen chapters, I am already invested. The only problem likely is the lack of clarity revolving the personality of Alchemy. We need to see more social situations to amplify our understanding of her. Not to the point she's predictable, but to the point we legitimately love or hate her as an individual based on our own ideals and hers. My currently unofficial wife: Faded1Fate, I tell you this:Try to use her thought process to answer these questions to make her more vivid, some of have already been answered:Is Kill Or Be Killed a good concept? Would you kill before threat has been shown if you believe a possibility of damage could be demonstrated? What if someone isn't physically endangering the country, but instead destabilizing it? Would execution be an option? At what point would it be?Would you manipulate your allies for the sake of your people? What would be your reaction if you realize that one of your allies has overturned the alliance? What is your ideal partner? (Compatibility question, not legitimate romance)Could you be angered to a point of destruction? Would you mercilessly kill a nation if they left your nation on the verge of annihilation?Just how smart are you? Academically wise, logically wise, psychologically wise? (Academic refers to the subjects - math, science, blabla. Logically is using logic to decide things. Psychologically is manipulation, and using people)Are you afraid of your strength? Would you kill a former ally who's actively trying to kill you?