Ever since I read Penguin Revolution, I've liked the manager/producer trope in light novels and CNs. The high school drama I could do without, however, since very few writers do it well.In the initial chapter, the MC is immediately plunged into a daily life full of complication, and the subsequent chapters certainly are built well on the foundation of the first.From the first chapter to succeeding chapters, the motivation of the MC to put his best effort into idol managing is also shown, though I look forward to seeing how that motivation matures in the future. He's certainly a go-getter, so it promises to be interesting.While the character of the MC is set up well, I'd like to see a bit more set up in the character of the girls in the chapters following their introductory scenes.The pacing is good, the plot is developing nicely. But, what the heck, if this is discount Haruhi Suzumiya, I will cry. Big fat ugly tears. Author, you are warned~ ;]The grammar is good enough, but needs work. The plot and the MC give the story enough charm that the reader is drawn more and more into the world. This story about the travails of Araragi Hideki, I definitely recommend it. Fight on, Araragi Hideki!
Don't worry about the grammar. You can hire an editor for that. A proofreader can also do the job of finding plot holes for you. Now, zombie apocalypse novels are a tough genre. You need to research all weapons be it melee or firearms, etc. You also need to be realistic as it was a modern survival thing. I can see that the story is going good so far and it has potential. The direction of the story is also superb! Good thing is, the characters are lifelike. I hope you improve your craft shortly. Will wait for that time to come ?
One of the best eastern fantasy novels in my opinion.Very deep world Background, filled with mysteries and an interesting protagonist. However, the lack of updates just ruined the story. A pity
A great story with a main character which is not overpowered from the second he the sword. .
This novel is a perfect mix of standard chinese novels with immortals and videogame-like life.This novel has a level system with abilities, classes and so on like a videogameHelial is a poor teenager that lives with little sister all by themselves in a small town since she was a newborn. He works to gain some money to be able to mantain his sister and him, he also train to become stronger so that he can improve his sister's life.They have a bigger brother that abandoned them.One day Helial got cursed by a mysterious sword that reduced his strenght stat to 0.05x. After that...This is just a summary of the first 1 or 2 chapters to let you know the backgroundIn my opinion this novel is just beautiful, well written and the character design is superb, if you start you will not be able to stop reading, the first chapters have a lot of flashbacks, then the story starts and becomes better and better.I also love the fact that some historical and mythological characters are revised and present in the novel
i give it five for everything it is an amazing story and I hope that you will get your motivation back . .
Hello, this is the author shameless reviews. I hope you guys like the story. As you know the story will have weak to strong journey and leveling system. You can expect wizards, cultist, assassins, fighters, warriors, monsters, and even demons in the story.Vote the story if you like it because if I win I will keep on updating this story!
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................?
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it's fanpic...medivial world with swords and magic.connected with all film/ series world.i don't know why this world medivial after contact with futerstic worlds.and biggest problem with this novel is MC's commonsense is vastly different from us...I quit
Yeah, I agree with all of the other people in the comments because they all made some really good points about the book, and most of the characteristics of different type of things going on in the story line
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