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I like this novel soo much I need lots of update on this novel
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the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention.
just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content.
overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece.
just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.
The novel is fantastic, but the translation sucks.Good novelGood novelGood novelGood novelGood novelGood novelGood novelGood novelGood novel
I read it further on another website and the mc is a idiot of the highest order. Later on he even gets raped from a female who was under an aphrodisiac and she blackmails him to take responsibility. After that he simps after her. The author writes the whole time in fight scenes that further talking is useless but they still talk further for whole 3 paragraphs or so. Then the only reason he use the swordmans class is because he wants to be handsome. Every other country they fight is losing and annihilated. If he had used the mage class he could use the upgrades more useful for mass destruction for more exp
The synopsis seems interesting enough, but I have a question. Will the angels look biblically accurate? If not, I’ll make a magical girl that can transform into a Seraphim-tier biblically-accurate angel.
author I just realised something you can try to improve on or maybe you have in later chapters since in currently at 260+. The sentences or rather the way the characters speak is too formal, sometimes it feels cringy and automated, no one speaks the way they do with so many words, the way to speak and the wordings don't feel natural. I'm very adept at English (even though I know it' may not be your first language) and the conversations feel like I'm reading a Shakespeare book most times. for example in chap 278 when Alex finds out about artemias plan to use him, what he says in reply to her question was honestly just too long with so many unnecessary words in between, it's even worse for artemias reply. You should try making the way they speak more natural, using common informal English lingo and having less words while still passing the message across. Just think about contemporary English (American/British) movies and series and ask your self, if these lines were to be acted out , would they sound off to a listener/watcher or would they sound so smooth it wouldn't even look like acting, would anyone speak this way casually with so many tedious words?. I think that'll help.
I am waiting to read it on mass release. This story is so good to read and let your imagine run wild. Can I read 200 chapters in one go after the mass release?
I enjoy it, are you sure this is original??
Seems like another cultivation novel cliche, but wrong, it is refreshing yet satisfying all together.
It's a novel for bored readers, not for veterans, it's a novel for readers who want explicit scenes of R#18 with a completely na#ive and weak MC who was just lucky enough to have the divinity of the god of se#x and he only becomes strong at the end.
So, if you have free time and you want to have Lemon scenes, this novel is for you.
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Amother one bites the dust, another novel gone to trash because people like us keep bullying authors about this and that when we ourselves cannot write **** ,please author start writing again and I will give five stars