Mistory cover and interesting story I add this book into my library
this is the bestest story in all of webnovel? I read 10 chapters in just one day!!. ?I can't read it anymore. but everyone of you should read this, and tell me aallll about it.
It's a nice story,whit a great development,but I came here seeking action and snu snu, here is snu snu, but the action is lacking.And the MC is kinda pathetic,as for his reactions and his thoughts, and more for his actions whit his female friend.I stopped in the 100 chaps.The mc mature in some latter chapters?he feels like a fat neet taking advantage of some poor defenseless and naive girls, than anything else.
We seem to be off to a very good start though you might want to take more time to develop some of the character relationships. You've got the concept down, just let it simmer a little more.
I've been through chapter one already, and I think this is the continuation of Reborn as the Demon Queen's Personal Chef, I love it already and can tell the storyline is really promising. I loved Part 1, btw?
I am going to try and give myself and unbiased review. Although I have only published my first chapter, I think that I am going to enjoy this project. I am mainly trying to use this as both practice for writing skills and experience for writing darker themed stories, Please give some feedback, it would be appreciated.
This story lacks substance. The characters are boring
"Ifritz, I already told you desu, you called my name in a wrong spell, the right is Kaenjieeeeee! Desu".
Hmm ... I see the number 2. 2 months, right? "Asked Mr. Rioy.
The Doctor, he got an beatiful eyes, the left eye is white and the right one is green.
they notice a bizarre sound coming from somewhere some sort of alarm sound. the father stops typing then stands up to check on what it is. the firstborn was distracted when he saw his mother's phone. the father starts searching for the source of sound, then there came a blinding light then vanishes immediately. the father was perplexed on what happened. it seemed he was the only one who saw the blinding light. while thinking about what the light was, he found the source of the sound it was an old iphone 5 that was disabled due to unknown reasons. the bizarre thing is, the battery was still around 6% even though it was never charged for a long time. then the father reached out to grab the phone. then a blinding light once again happened.
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