Its honesty okay, and just that its okay. The paragraphs are a bIt too long so its a mouthful to read that big chunk of text. The character interactIons are a bIt rough. I’d say give it a try as it could be good but it was hard for me to read. Best of luck author!
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I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.
started reading when there were only 30 chapters out... excited to see what happens next. I hope you keep this going!
This is a novel about a general becoming a spirit that acts like a devil, known as the Krieger. She is a person with the alignment of lawful evil. Be warned that morals would sometimes be broken in this story. Also, don't expect her to act well. As in the beginning, She would rather be violent. As said before, human morals will not always be applied in this story. I will not sugarcoat my MC, and the readers can judge for themselves if she is truly evil or not. I am also not that good at English, so grammar and spelling mistakes might often appear.Please comment on my mistakes so I can fix them. Your help will greatly be appreciated.Thanks for reading my story, and enjoy. [Hope you like it, and please leave a review.]
I like it a lot was sad that it's over but still the vocab and grammar can do better.
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why would you recommend me #harem trash......................................................................................................
The story was really good. But then the MC went FULL harem mode. I don't know why the author did this. He even made the MC feel bad for cheating on his girlfriend. but then he continued to cheat on her with other girls.
For some reason the 'american' girls became okay with it. Well, i am dropping this at this point. Read till chapter 450 i think. This review is for anyone who thinks this is not a harem. It is. It is a harem.
Hey guys, its me, the author. This story of mine has short chapters in volume 1, and a bit boring. Long chapters in volume 2 and so on, still a bit boring. For me, the story is slow paced, but it is epic!! I don't know much how to this story, but I will try my best. Give some reviews guys.
NOT DISAPPOINTED
This novel is interesting. Usually, we see mc reincarnated to his past but here mc wife and other ghost wife or just other ghost are reincarnated. Mc future self when he died become the most powerful and fearful ghost of netherworld. Now that he didn’t died when he supposed to, he have to deal with all the wife he married to because of matchmaker. Also this novel is really well done. This is harem 100 percent from what I see.
You won’t understand this ☝️ if you don’t read the novel because it really good it way better than what I say in this review.
Also to the people who won’t read this because of harem than you are really missing it. Mc use his brain here. He won’t jump to girl because she beautiful. I want to write more but right now I can’t figure out something good for the review right now so that it.
Really try before you say something because it really good in my opinion and I’m very picky.
Hello! This is Japhet, the author (As you can see, I shamelessly gave myself a 5 out of 5 hahaha
Aye! The premise is interesting hehe! :DI enjoyed reading a story about a sword that was trying to reach a higher level hehe!Writing-wise, it's nice, grammar and punctuation are great :DI also loved the world-building hehe! It was pretty detailed, and I could see that the author had put a lot of thought into itttGreat job, author! <3