my honest review of this novel is that it has a lot of potential i came in thinking it was just gonna be a novel with 18 plus scenes every chapter but it isnt the beginning was the best part so far it started out slow and got into the power levels and different abilities and how the stats work which is very unique but i feel like the quality dropped when he came out the dungeon the author throws new enemies at us outta nowhere the power system seems all messed up like he can freeze the concept of levels how is that even possible i understand freezing time or space but levels and stats is absurd i think his eye is very underused he it can literally allow him to read minds and view their people lives so he should know there weaknesses and their fighting patterns yet he dosent do that and 1 of his lovers gets a "weaker" version of his time stop that allows her to be immortal to anyone but him and i dont like how the author throws enemies that are continental and have conceptual abilities at the palm of their hand at the mc i think author should just rewrite the whole novel as it has alot of potential just go slower dont make him automatically planetary and have the ability to fight beings millions of years older than him in 2 days worth of time
I made it to chapter 17. Translation quality seems totally fine. Unfortunately the story itself is so bad that I cannot continue. Basically the behaviour of the MC doesn't really match what a thousand year old monster would do, even though the author keeps bringing that up.
is the story really completed like it says above? I read the last chapter above, and it doesn't feel completed, just says end of volume 1... Are other volumes going to be published as different books?
Chapter 220 Review-Overall great read for picky and broad viewers alike. It’s been a while since a video game novel has been this good imo
At first interactions feel a bit empty and the language doesn’t flow well, but it’s drastically improved over time. There are still some “he/she” mixups though.
The story and world are all very good. The plot progresses nicely along the main character and everyone feels real. There are some things that don’t make sense like the MC’s ability to fight things stronger than him. Even if he has extra stats per level, some of these enemies with their level would one shot home before he could blink, so it feels like the MC wins for no reason sometimes but it’s entertaining regardless.
Tsk tsk... It should've been the other book that was released. At least it was an orignal and a very interesting concept. Now this here, this is just something you can find somewhere else. It doesnt matter if it delays a week because the author will still upload it, but an original is much more entertaining. Now I have wasted a week of my life. Which is always by the way.
Well, this book is somewhat okay, with its natural dose of cliches. Concept is common and story is somewhat confusing. Well I hope you do your best. How much words do I have to type until this bloody review can be posted? Oh d*mn. I haven't done the ratings yet. That's why I cant post. There... done! Well pleasure to meet you. Aufwiedersehen!
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soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear..
MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all..
One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all..
there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid..
Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run..
MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else..
Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time
One of the best novels.10/10
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So far So good read. First 32 chapters Are Fun. I Hope there Will be some othe ussage of the cheats. Btw i reálky dont understant why i need to write 140 characters, when i see previews with like 10 words, thats totaly Bull ssss. Ok thats thé end, 32 chapter doesnt need mě more effort
This novel is somewhat better than the Turquoise Pond/Kunlun Saint novel, but not by much. The MC suffers from the same problems as the author's previous novel, that being:
1. The MC is very reactionary and doesn't actively do anything. Our MC is in a demonic sect where 95% of the sect wants him dead, yet he just farms and doesn't take steps to reduce dangers in the future. Inevitably, our MC gets taken advantage of by someone then he gets revenge on them secretly. This is a recurring theme in this novel and happens every time new antagonists are introduced (every 30-50 chapters). It was interesting the first time, but having the same thing occur semi-regularly just shows that our MC isn't exactly that smart.
2. The MC has no personality. Our MC doesn't feel any emotions, and he doesn't seem to have any desires whatsoever. The author tries to explain this away by saying the demoness fed him a Yang Gu (makes him only feel emotions for her) but that's just a bs excuse. You could replace the MC with a robot and almost nothing would change in this novel. I consider his lack of emotions/personality to be the biggest weakness of this novel.
3. Everything our MC has is granted by the system, he doesn't have any unique skills or talents acquired by his own efforts/intelligence. Enough said.
Even with all of these flaws, this novel is still one of the better novels in this site so I consider it to be a decent junk food novel. 3/5
A very unimaginative and boring attempt at an evil mc.
The mcs gold finger has nothing to do with filth. Its just a murderhobo system that rewards him with points for killing and can upgrade his cultivation and techniques with a click of a button. The use of evil points is also uninspired.
While the mc is truly evil and I give author pros for that, its very one dimensional. He has no emotions, its like watching a robot cut chickens. How can readers connect with a character like this?
The mc is overpowered and faces no problems making the conflicts boring cause you know how they are all going to end. The characters around the mc are similarly cardboard-like and offer nothing to the story than points for the mc to use.
There is no excitement to be had reading this novel.