I love the character design and world development so far, also when Masahiro gouges his eye will it ever comeback?. because it seems like with the swords that there is supernatural powers that are powerful enough to do it.
The book seems Interesting but the rate of releases seriously set the story back I mean it’s been out for I believe three years now and it’s only got 5 chapters. Really the only problem I see with the novel. So I say keep up the work author and try to get them chapters out.
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Why? Why? Why? Why am I addicted,?!! It's not fair, author that you have to make your book this great. Okay , not exaggerating though! The book is really nice and it has a fresh idea. Not a fan of sci-fi genre but I just got to read yours!
It is shame that this seems to be tropped. You were even invited as possible winner for competition. I read from the comments that there had been some problems with writer´s life. I don´t know what kind of problems. At least I hope you are still alive. As for the story. Naturally I like it very much. UIt is nice fresh air to have dark natured healer. Well, Alex is closer to neutral evil. I think he was just normal human when he came back. At least he is sane. To those how haven´t read the series. I will highly recomment to read. Even thought series is tropped. It is rare to find tropped series be so worth reading.
Overall very average 3.5/5The writing quality is sub par and just reads poorly.The story itself is flat lacking pull. There’s a fixation on gods and trying to touch upon the human psyche which comes off very convoluted.It is an interesting attempt at the over saturated idea of tower climbing for humanity. If you’re bored it’s a moderately entertaining read with room for improvement.
Your story holds potential. I can see that you have a very clear image in your head of how your story looks and plays out, but due to a lack of rhythm in your writing, a protagonist that could be better developed, and repeated grammar and sentence structure mistakes, it fails to come across. Overall, I believe you can get there. You just have to keep practicing. You might want to consider hiring an editor, a least until your English improves. I wish you the best of luck!
it is pretty good, though there isnt much basis for me to be saying this since there are only 4 chapters out right now. the system has a lot of potential, at least imo, and it seems like an interesting story. does it have romance or harem? idk. even so, if there is harem i hope its good at least. I already like the general vibe of the novel, so i hope this one is further translated.
The beginning of the story sounds frighteningly intimidating. Genre - black fantasy ... but see what happens next ...The use of non-typical terms needs to be clarified, I mean, the atrium ... it’s good to have Google and Wikipedia, and if it weren’t? And not all readers will look in Google.Some kind of unbalanced hero ... but easy to read. Words flow like molasses in a confectionery factory. The meaning of what is happening is clear.But the protagonist of some kind is not adequate ... eeee ... he also cannibalized to the same ... yes it is for sure, original, but you forgot to put the genre in tags - horror!The anti-hero turned out to be very disgusting ... the author skillfully managed to reflect this.It would probably be worthwhile to point out in Synopsis that there will be terrible, anti-humanistic values in the novel that contradict common morality.The novella is designed - strongly for an amateur of this genre - black fantasy.I was shocked ... after reading the first chapter ... well, what can I say to the author succeeded in his idea, to create a repulsive hero or anti-hero.Not a typical villain ... some kind of grotesque and Alogism - there are definitions in Google.The author is undoubtedly talented, brilliant, he can easily write an image of otgolkayuzogo antigiroya that the reader is not sophisticated genre - horror, it may even be somewhat shocked, disgusting manner of the protagonist. As I said, my familiar literary critic is simply creating an image of a hero. But to be able to show the image of an anti-hero, this is an extremely difficult task! Only by an experienced writer!Bravo, the author managed only in one chapter, to create such an image.Alas ... as a reader, the first chapter was enough for me, to understand that this is clearly not my genre.The author can only wish ... creative inspiration.
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well...! this story its good but the problem is CHINA number 1, I can see in the future there have many racism and china or mc making enemies with all nation (earth)! well I pray that this will not happen!
Great novel, which started great. In the early parts this was one of my favourite novels, it seems to have slowed down a bit now but is still pretty damn good.