Unfortunately, that seemed to muck things up a bit as Gwen irritatedly glanced at me.
"Straight to the point." He warningly said. Frank suddenly speaks loudly as he can to announce the breakable part.
Those sanctimonious elders would do anything possible to take her life.
Very good book, enjoying this immensely.
I have been reading this novel for a while now , I really really liked it although its simplicity I had lots of fun reading it , I also liked how the author putting lots of his effort in making such respectful plot , Even the characters he give every character its own role in the plot , Even the fight sequence is great you will have fun reading them , and I loved the dark and psychological part of this novel , how the characters interact with each other you will find it very special with amazing sense of mystery in it , I believe that this novel will be something one day because the author puts a lot of effort in it.
Honest reviews are here..[Extreme Spoiler Alert]When you saw the word "betrayal" in the synopsis, don't misunderstand it..The betrayal hardly can be called betrayal as MC in his previous life, he just a person who doesn't get any love or attention from his parents.. But his parent do their responsibility as parents, like giving him home and food.. They just love and dot his little brother more.. I think it kinda normal for most families.. Youngest children always get the most attention and love from their parents while the eldest child always get ignored..When MC dies, he also dies because of the truck.. It is not because his parents or his little brother kill him.. So, the betrayal in synopsis might bring some misunderstanding..As MC reincarnated into the new world where magic existence, MC is unlucky as his mother died during his birth.. He stayed with his father, stepmother (2nd wife), and stepbrother (5 years older than him).. He left alone as his father also just ignored him (pretend to hate him). His stepmother and stepbrother are treating him just like an annoying kid, but not to the point that can be called abusive..As soon as MC has been born, he is already aware that he is reincarnated, and a few moments later, he awakened his golden finger, the system.. Then, time skip, MC is 6 years old.. He started to collect EXP..Within a month, he gained 11k EXP.. Then, he used his EXP to convert into stat point 11,000 EXP=11 stat points.. Then, time skipped for 4 years, which MC now become 10 years old.. During his 4 years time skip, MC stat point is not changing at all, not even 0.001 stat point.. But he did hoarding the EXP, but only 24,000 EXP.. When MC is 6 years old, he can collect 11k EXP within a month, but for the whole 4 years, he only gained 24k EXP without any increase in his stat?? It is very disappointing..Then awakening ceremony, he show that he awakened two top-rank Spirit root: Fire and darkness.. (low, medium, high, top, peak).. He goes to Academy to start his study and the Academy Arc..Then, after joining class on his school day, he takes a mission.. At the mission, he found a hidden cave and got an "opportunity".. As a result, he is in a coma for ANOTHER 5 YEARS.. What is this "opportunity" that makes him lose his 5 years' worth of his time?? That is The Memories of the Great Dragon.. There are no bloodlines or skills or items or treasures or anything.. Just Memories.. There is no improvement in his stat too..Then, he came back to the Acadeny and pretended that he was kidnapped by others for 5 years.. And now, he fall behind his peers because most of them spend their time improving their rank and skill, training to become strong while he daydream in the "Memories".Then I stop reading.. lol.. I read this novel because of Overpowered Tag.. I even repeatedly go to the main page of this novel to reread synopsis and all tag, as I thought I might misread about this novel..There are times when the author puts a wrong stat in MC status window.. The author might copy the wrong status, not the latest causing MC attributes for Endurance, and Mana has decreased.. Even though the reader already points out exactly which sentence it is, there are no corrections.. The author probably just ignores his reader..At chapter 20+, we still don't know about the name of this novel rank for Magus and the rank of Martial Artist.. Mage Apprentice is the usual name to be used by many authors but Mage Initiate?? Shicidan and Hacidan Martial Artist?? What with that rank?? If you want to follow Black Belt grade of Jijutsu, you should start it from Shodan (Black Belt 1st Dan), Nidan (Black Belt 2nd Dan), Sandan (3rd Dan), Yondan (4th Dan), Godan (5th Dan), Rukodan (6th Dan), Shicidan (7th Dan), Hacidan (8th Dan), Kyudan (9th Dan), Jyudan (10th Dan).. But you start with Shichidan.....I guess this is not my forte.. Anyways, good luck to the author.. I feel bad that I only last for 20+ chapters. If only the beginning of the story is more interesting, I might keep reading it.. I give it 3 stars as I feel that this novel is not that bad but also not that good, kinda average..
Fastpass is going to be there for a while
Good first chapter , the story sounds good but the synopsis needs a few changes ...good luck with your book.
So far i really like the book i feel the Writing is good. And im super excited to whim being a half devil half angel. maybe for his class you could make him like a magic swordsman who uses light magic and dark or blood magic. Since he started out with high stats and gets 2 extra stat points each lvl up.
The story is good and I love reading game novels! Keep it up author! The way you make the Arnis as a game is so cool! And I think you should put VRMMORPG to be exact!
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