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It's such a great novel! It's been a long time since I've laughed this much and the story just portraits how hilarious some situations can get! The story goes along smoothly with all the elements and well paced. In my opinion, a good read.
anyone get the raw link of this novel...........
anyone get the raw link of this novel...........
anyone get the raw link of this novel...........
Mhm....The novel seems interesting and the plot is good, I've already read the first 18 chapters and I'm getting hooked. I hope this novel continue to bring me many surprises
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Ah man.. good story.. you have marvelous background story.. path of beast king.. make sure you make great story.. because if you are not make good story.. you will make the background suck
.. overall this is great.. and this like game that I know.. with nickname that normal and not like poetry in Chinese vrmmo novel
Another novel I finished by Sixth-sama! He always write such great stories so you better add them all! So go on now read it, you will not regret it one bit! Umu!
Guys! This is the same as the first one! I am just 14 years old so please tell me if i made some mistakes so that I can improve..................................................
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The novel is really good . Let it be characters( my fav is Amelia... she's so cute ??) , world development.., etc.....But I feel like the pacing is really slow as it takes a lot of chapters for one event or the overall development of the plot to go through.... Thats the only downside. But don't let it get to you as the Author doesn't disappoints us with the content . It really is deserving to be in my one of the favourite novels.
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I think one non-plot related thing that stands out to me for this story is the 'unique' setting. I've read a few (hundred) urban romance stories, over various platforms and they're always based in western countries or places like china, korea, or japan. I hope that Malaysian culture and themes that I or we don't always get to see will continue to be translated through this book.As for the story itself... what possibly could go wrong when a dangerous man who has dealings in the arms trade falls in love? Please, heroine, stay and find out.
Novel is very good. Mc is overpowered and domineering and the harem has good women in it. World building is well thought out and the power system is easy to understand. Writing is decent and updates are consistent.
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