ElementarGamer
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
A slice-of-life reincarnation fantasy story with a focus on world-building and character development. I would appreciate it if you would at least try out the first 20 chaps before deciding on the novel and its content.
I only plan on writing one webnovel this year, and this is it.
So thanks for reading; I wish you all a good day.
Es bastante interesante, es una historia un poco diferente de un mundo inverso y veo que vale la pena leerlo hasta ahora le doy 5 estrellas por un buen comienzo y una escritura impresionante en la trama y sus seguimientos. Aunque acaba de ser publicado tiene mucho potencial. Aunque recomiendo que también hubiera superpoderes más o menos al estilo Boku no hero, pero sin sus super villanos con formas extrañas, puedo ver que si se podría adaptar posteriormente. Lo que no recomiendo y se va a adaptar el enfoque de super poderes es que los poderes sean de orígen público. Eso es todo, por cierto agreguén más masculinidad al mc. Y también agreguen imágenes de referencia de los personajes.
still chapter 1.but it's ok. My first fantasy novel here....NO BL PLS... ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Cheesy and innocent and pure romance. Written well, and easy to read, with limited substance.
Good for a break.
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is the book completed?
Almost halfway through and what's annoying me is the ML who claims his human mate is weak whereas he gets hard on his submissivie human girlfriend and various clubsubmissives. He has the biggest wolfpack but somehow he spents so much time in the BDSM club playing a Dom. FL has a ignorant friend.
lo is definitely my favorite character. cant wait for the next chapters.
Love love this story great work wish could give it 10 stars…..
I like the book, it has some grammar issues but it’s still very good. But I still want more, what happened with his sister who was her abuser? What happened with maverick? Was is him tha bad guy behind his sister’s abuse? I didn’t like all the abuse that Amoli went through but it developed very good
poor Jess I hope whoever she is getting married to treat her good I'll read on to make sure of it.
