The Blondie had that look which seemed to tell Riki that he need not worry as he'd take care of him in Iason's place. "It's all right," and he did whisper the thought, but gently this time, the words taking on a more intimate tone. "I got you."
(Ok, let's see, what I should install now...GO!)
Looking in the clouds floating peacefully inside the ring, he read the information available to him.
This could have been a great story. I’v only read about 100 chapters so far and i can no longer take it, its so stupid it makes me me want to delete the authors brain. First of she is supposed to be a “secret agent/spy” in her life befor this, thats how she can progress in her cultivation so quickly. however an 8 year old can out smart her and cripple her.Secret agent VS an 8 year old, 8 year old wins. What sense does that make??Second she is supposed to be a “SECRET AGENT/SPY” but she gets emotional and scared about every little thing, and shes overly attached to her BEAUTIFUL MASTER. The way she goes on about him its like he’s the ML.There are many more things wrong with this book but i cant find the words, to sum it up it is a disappointment. Dont read it!!!
Good story , moderate pace , mystery is there , but faster update or mass release pls
duike:but why would yu fall for invisible dragon! you cant even saw him!
“Yea, I was there when Duan Ling Tian was carried away, half-dead, but now, after taking the Grade Eight Gold Injury Pill, he’s back to being full of vigor and vitality.”
I really like this story but it was so rarely updated on the last site which kinda of made me a bit sad. However I finally can read it again!
This reviews is made after reading up to chapter 23 of this novel, so spoilers and misunderstandings is definitely going to spawn if you don't know the context, but this is how a really good author sparked a reader to push him to write a long comment on chap 23 and leave a review for you all to see.Copy pasted my comment:Not gonna lie, when Julia went berserk I picked up some yandere vibes from her, and when she got the idea to kill Lars to earn his love from Ellen (ingame, but this could develop to real life consequences) I imagine myself in MC's shoes and got all this god view information like us readers, walked up to Ellen, ? slapped her face and straight up yelling at her face about developing some yandere tropes to his middle school friend who is head over heels over my other best friend.This awoke some burning feeling in me as a reader but. Props to the Author for hinting at this but for the moment didn't develop to worse case scenario "yet".Haven't read further as the making of this comment, just wanted to write all my feelings down and continue on. But as a side note.I think that my "fears" are unwarranted at this point of time because the flow and writing of this scene,makes me feel like the author doesn't want to take the yandere traits to a dangerous consequence or conclusion in this point of time. Thank you for reading this spurr of the moment comment?, and huge praise for the author to write really likeable and relatable characters. Interesting story to hook me up and a great introduction to how an MOBA plays out in more indepth. (from a gamer that only scraped the surface on League and didn't invest time to learn the game. You, author has enlightened me to this amazing genre of games??. I encourage you to pick this novel up and read. Because it hooked me up with the story's great pacing and at the same time wonderful character and background development.
Really well written. Not too fast and not too slow. Looking for ward to this story getting to its first hundred chapters . Please keep posting regularly !!!!
Very well written and thought out story with an excellent blend between the game world and the real world and how the effects of events bleed through between the two. The way the interpersonal relationships are handled is one of the defining parts of the story for me. With each of the main characters bringing their own uniqueness to the group dynamic, but all meshing together as if they were meant to always have been for each other
I am happy that the 1st book I read here is this one but also a little bit sad cause I don't think other books will be able to live up to this