Aoki_Aku
Hurray! I thought this story would be liked that of a horror movie, at the beginning I was very hesitant because it's my first time reading stories like this. I was only curious but as I go along reading it, I started liking the story. Thanks author.
I'll tell you a secret - the story has one big problem - it's the speed of writing. Rather, if what I heard is true, then the problem is not the speed of writing, but the speed of the spread. The reason, as I also heard, is ****** - the author has a contract with the publisher that publishes a manga that he can not lay out the chapters as before, until the manga catches up with the novel.However, the novel is simply gorgeous.
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its sad the novel was good the idea was good then the usual happened with CN novels and went from 4.5 to 3.0good until chapter 138 or so , then the author for some strange reason threw out of the window a good part of the plot and the worldbuilding he made so far, grandmaster strongest realm so far? nah scratch that, lets make them weak and completely forget about martial warriors, lets make this all about the ability users and forget about what we said before about martial grandmaster being the strongest, family? lets completely forget about them, who cares about them anyway im way too strong by now anyway and they can't catch up so puff and they're gone.then the author in some chapters remember what he said and try to patch it saying "well he was a mortal before...and he dindt truly know about the real strong people" etc, and well the family? lets pretend theyre gone we cant patch it up anyway.
This story is a hidden gem in my eyes. It always keeps you on your toes and it's comedic nature makes it not exhausting to read. 10/10 whould recommend
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Love the character work and the world building. Really excited to read more, quite curious about Carter too! Hopefully Chloe will find out everything!
The other soccer novel coming out seemed horrendous. Luckily this one has a much better synopsis. It seems like this is the only hope for a good soccer plot so far.
This story leaves you wanting more
Another amazing story by the one and only Midnight Muse ...️ so worth the wait until it was finished. I cannot wait for kats story to be finished ...
l love Alpha Jasper's characterization. He packs enough punches. Let's see how cold he can be
i loved this story
