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Was reading omnistore system and caught up then decided to read your other books then picked this up and really liked it and was wondering whether you still have plans of continuing or you'll be focusing on the others
a truly wonderful experience the protagonist is not some cut and paste archetype of I'm a hero so the world moves with me or yes the odds are against me but somehow everything turns out fine .
Hiya! Attached is a breakdown of my review: Writing Quality 4/5: Noticed a few grammar errors here and there, some that I commented on, some that I didn't. I think some (like the missing period) should be catchable after a few proofreads. Update Stability 5/5: Not much to comment on there. Honestly the length of the chapters are super impressive. Story Development 4/5: I think you're aware of the issue since I noticed you mentioning this in the author's comments. I think it might be because I don't really read ML novels that much, but the first few chaps made me feel a bit overwhelmed. Especially with all the names being tossed around, some parts took a few rereads for me to get a grasp on what was happening. Character Design 5/5: Seems super detailed so far!World Background 5/5: This category took my breath away! The first few paragraphs describing the world literally gave me chills ahahaha. Your descriptions are probably your greatest strength, so I would say try to couple that with the action and the info a bit more so that there's more of a balance. Overall super good moods you set! Like it definitely matched what I expected after seeing your cover lel
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on.The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
For the moment (Chapter 4) I find the beginning of the story very good, I can't wait to read the rest. So good luck and continue your good work author-san (Sorry for the mistakes, review written in French translated with goolge translation)
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A real work of art. The author narrates everything in a way that makes you even feel empathy with the characters, and that is a hard thing to do, even more in an action novel. That, plus the great writing skills of the author, make it a must-read.
oThis took my imagination to the next level. I can imagine every description written in my head. Looking forward to how you will end this story!?
Thank you RWX at WW for the translation. He has up to book four translated. Go there to read. Good story with a different feel to it. Reminds me of a badass MadMax.
The first chapter recalled the start track ... and the movie "Star Troops" of 1997.And the zero chapter reminds something of “Star Trek” - the imeriy of the Klingons and Romulans.But the first chapter is fascinating, a display of emotions, a look at the war from the side of beetles. Although the names of the secondary characters some kind of furious. But read with interest. I will add to my library for reading.Thank you for the interesting story, I hope for frequent updates and at least a premium only on chapter 100.
Hello ?, Eshwar here, it is currently chapter 266: The Fallen, and the vol 3 Destruction had ended three chapters back, and chapter 264: 2 Years was supposed to be the first chapter to start of vol 4: Planet Antinoüs, but creating the new vol slipped my mind while uploading ??, Ahem!! Anyway, I'm not here to complain about anything, since I have been posting reviews about things like from the beginning, I thought of posting one now too, hope you guys are doing well, if not don't worry cause everything will be fine, hope you enjoy reading this novel, and please bear with it for the first few chapters and you will surely enjoy the rest of the story, anyway, thank you for reading, and [Peace]