Authors writing quality and story development is good, but there is this one single flaw that makes this novel so annoying to read, its about MC.
Everytime there is a fight someone from his harem stands up to fight then get clapped and them he will go "I WILL KILL YOU" and let his other wifes beat the guy off, and make that annoying heroic speech.
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One star to balance out obvious rating manipulation. If you have to manipulate the review ratings, your a sorry sad excuse for a human being....
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Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to.
Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.)
Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps.
Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up.
World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here.
Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.
Personally for me it is a near perfect novel. Reasons are
1. The smoothness of story progression
2. Characters - very realistic and well thought
3. Action scenes are nicely done
4. There is a strong sense of purpose in whatever actions the protagonist and side characters perform
SPOILER BELOW
For the author - I understand why the three energies can’t mix and fuse but desmond being so overwhelmingly talented can’t he use mana as the primary energy, ki or aura for body strengthing and lastly arcanum for the mind/soul.
Please think about it dear author, once again absolutely love your work
Very well written. I never read a racing novel before. I hope there will be lots of racing scenes in addition to the beast system scenes! Thanks.
The writing could use some improvements, but overall I like the characters. I'm writing this on a school chromebook and I like this way more than anything I'm given to read at school and that means a lot because those books are written by people who write for a job.
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Good Writing Style
Woo....the synopsis alone is intriguing and interesting... well I'm gonna let the author know that am following this novel for more updates.
When I read this novel I could see that the novel is has been created with a great deal of effort.
The characters are explained very well and you can visuals exactly what is needed to understand what is going on.
You are able to understand the characters reason for doing certain things this makes the reader able to understand what the character is going through.
The system is very well implemented and helps lead the main character along without distracting from the story.
I would highly recommend this novel for anyone that enjoys a well written novel with a great story.
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