Am at 11 chap currently. this is very engaging Mc character has lot of potential in future. keep it up.
It's a very good novelWith nice story lineAnd I'm looking Forward to the future Direction of the bookThumbs up to the writerWith it's Mixture of different genres It has a very Good Growth
I like the mc and butler, but it's way too slow and has so much unnecessary dialog
A/N: I rate my book 5 StarsEren: Shameless Author indeedA/N: I hope I'm not the only one using power stones on this novelEren: You definitely areA/N: ??
How can authors ruin the story with one chapter is beyond my understanding… Dont get me wrong, the novel is great, good read, but why the f… When the general is treathening MC, he just flops and joins the military just cuz his sister was kidnapped??? And then the story for me just went downhill… i mean The MC just 10 chapters ago understood that the worlds are merging, and he is strong af, but he flops under the first pressure?? Thats just idiotic development. Up to 140 chapters are really tood read and then i just can’t read stupidity.
Very nice......................
I really liked the genre the author adapted. Putting high hopes in this new novel!! yippee! ? a lil typos though but, we can definitely overlook it!!! All the best Author! FEED US MORE!!
the story is good and the character is amazing
I had to comment on this. I read all the chapters in free access and... it was terrible! I mean, it really inspired some kind of horror in me looking at the concept of the groundhog from this point of view. It didn't help that the author described in detail the reactions of both the MC and the viewers to what was happening. Overall, an impressive novel. Special thanks for the Eastern flavor.
Far as i read it's very good, i really like it.... I'm new in writing so I'm not expert on pointing wrongs but all i can say is that it's very good and captivating... Overall i rate this at 5 personally..... Good work dude
Ok, the story is well-thought and interesting. I have just got some few questions here and there but all In it's a really gripping story.For some reason I can't leave the comment until I've written 140 words. By the way I am not even done with the book yet
Amazing story . I love how every chapter got me hooked?. Nice job author !