I love it! It' has an relatively op system but a great story to counter it.
Summary: You die because your pretty useless and depressed in your current life so you go and wish upon and shooting star and... you get the wish you've been asking for. More PLEASEEE
I wanted to write a fun, cultivation world novel while using the usual cliches and tropes of the genre in my own way. This is not your typical cultivation novel, and I hope you enjoy this.
This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills.
Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week.
I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories.
So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment.
This is my entry for WPC #108.
I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released.
Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it.
Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.
Currently im on chapter 25 the novel was great if you guys love vrmmorpg music and the adventure genre you guys should check it out by the time this review is made the story is still at its way for development but its a gem to be marked
Looking forward for future updates!
It’s a great story so far, and quite funny too! I think it will make it far! 20/10.
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Sci-fi genre needs a lot of mental theories and on top of that, creativity. So, not everyone could pull off such a genre. Mixing magic with science is a unique concept that the author has used. Worth a try!
For a new book, the story and commercial status are progressing smoothly, I like that. I also like the fact that the writer is well descriptive and knows how to make a reader hooked. Thumbs up author
well didn't read it and i wont cause of the wimpy beginner Japanese type guy.. to me being weak doesn't mean you have to be a wimpy or annoying type of MC. Most MC always start weak anyway.
Aight, I've read till the latest chap so here we go1:Tips for new readers, turn off your common sense and serious mode, this is one wild and crazy ride, do not expect common sense as the Mc and his abilities are beyond that.2:This work is and I quote, 'a shitpost' and 'the junk food of webnovel'. But it's the good kinda shit and delicious type of junk food. It's meant as one of those works you go to when you had a bad day and badly need a laugh, just like a meme.3:The English and grammar is good, no problem whatsoever reading it, the pov change is stated as well so you won't break your head analyzing who's who.4:The Mc does a lot of misunderstanding, and by that a lot, I mean A LOT, that's one of the good parts of this work though, so try not to think to much about it. Like I said, turn off those common sense.5:The Mc doesn't act the stereotypical Mc type.....so don't expect him killing left and right just cause someone look down on him...no, I'm pretty sure they'll die or get beaten up due to his work, one way or another.6:The update is stable, it's daily if I'm not mistaken.7: Also, one of the chaps made me cry....granted, I cry quite easily but still...just shows you that deep down this crazy Mc, is a normal human being...not so normal but this kinda speaks volumes, It kinda feels like deep down a brainless zombie...is a beating heart♥...also pun intended and yeah sounds kinda cringy.Anyways, good work author! Keep up the good work. I'm a fan now....also, lemme be shameless for a bit and promote my work here?all over the place,you don't mind do you author-sama?
This is one of these novels where I don't really know what to say, except, No!Completely stupidly unbalanced idea, boring as hell side characters and hair rising monologues.A MC who gained two degrees in 4 years in widely different fields from a supposedly good university, who can't think to steps ahead and the decisiveness of a third grader. The MC is an Elon Musk, combined with a Xi Jinping and dead roadkill.Washing out impurities by picking grass.Sufficient to say, don't waste your time on translation or reading this. Not worth it.
Nonsensical "realistic" crafting where one guy can make few guns and cannons in few days without any experience. Good idea for a story, terrible execution.
Amazing amazingg I want more chapters cause there is a cliff hanger it wont be good to just hang the reader you knowww More chapter please author!