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I really can't understand why so much people like this.The story is pretty generic, "hero gets a magic intelligent item in the form of a system that grants OP power with some xianhuan context
This Novel is just OK, it's not so great as other readers meantios as. There are messed up sentences, if there are no Novels to read this will cover your want. Not too exciting story, storytelling us just ok, world development is fine, character development is also just so so and ya overall the whole Novel is just OK to read, don't have too much expectations as this is just OK to read Novel.
Much better than I’m Really a Superstar in my opinion considering it's an original.Unlike I’m Really a Superstar this focuses on showbiz rather than jumping from one thing to another.
FL is too pitiful and the system is too much of an a**hole for my liking ?. Also, it gets old pretty quickly how quickly the FL gives into lust so quickly. Losing your V-card doesn't turn you into a nymphomaniac lol ?! The author (and descriptive erotic scenes ???) is great, but the FL is just not relatable and doesn't act anywhere near realistically causing a lack of reader investment.If this story was re-edited with the FL having a bit more backbone and the system being much less of an unlikable d-bag, I'd be able to get into it.
The MCs cheat is a system, one of its perks at the lowest level is .05 Chinese renminbi per breath taken. Converting the cheat into real numbers that, unless the author is a f’cking idiot, should be accurate. .05Y/$ per breath taken. 17,000-30,000 breaths per day, resting or light walking. Moderate exercise for an hour, 50,000, multiple hours, 50-78,000. 17K=850Y/$, 30K=1,500Y/$. 50K=2,500Y/$. 78K=3,900Y/$. A relatively cheap restaurant experience, ie a chipotle burrito or a hamburger from chili’s, would be 20Y-40Y in China, while it’d be roughly 15-20$ in America. Even the lowest amount is 850Y/Day. 3 meals means it’s 790 a day. Basic utilities for a 1000sqft apartment, 400-500Y, Internet is another 100Y. 600Y. That means in one day he has paid a months utilities and food plus 190Y extra. Even in the city center the nice apartments are only 4,000Y, so in 4-5Days, eating out every meal, he has his months rent. 6 days max he has the apartment, Internet, utilities covered perfectly, make it 7 days for mobile phone and the months transportation expenses. With the rest of the money he can buy branded Nike shoes or leather business shoes, every day. New jeans and a T-shirt every day if he doesn’t get shoes. New sports jacket every day without shoes or other clothes. New kitchen appliances etc etc. this is with the LOWEST breath level. The absolute lowest. You are basically set for life to never work again, near unlimited new clothing, unlimited purchasing of anything really, all the games, all the mobile purchases, anything. Heck, just throw this money into stocks at random and you’ll eventually have so much money the rest of the system just does matter. Let’s put it like this, easily get 1,500Y per day, that’s 187 per hour. In America, let’s go that the buying power is half. So imagine making at minimum 93.75$ an hour, in an hour day. That’s 45,000$ a month. 540,000$ per year. You could literally buy ANYTHING you want.
The novel gets worse and worse. When it gets to the point where he's hiding treasures worth a lot of money for no reason like the watch, I knew this story was ****. Just when you think it's going to get better it takes 5 steps back and continues to do the same ****.
Up until chapter 550 this is an acceptable novel after that the whole basis of the novel gets forgotten and the plot becomes an entirely different novel. My recomendation read until the doomsday mission is declared then drop it.
***** eagerly waiting for more chapters to flow@@### so far pleasant read ***** ???????????????????????????????
Should get more recognition, unique idea and it is well executed, only complain is the rate of updates rest is really good, hope you dont drop it.
Calidad de escritura (3/5), actualización de estabilidad (1/5), desarrollo de historia (2/5), diseño de personajes (2/5)Fondo de mundo (2/5)
This already has 247 chapters translated on some other siteOther names: Death SutraWebsite: qidianRating: 9.4 (495)Chapters: (1212)Status: CompletedAuthor Lv: 5No. of works: 6Year started: 2012Year ended: 2014