The translation quality for this is decent but the synopsis is a complete lie. There are a lot of annoying cliche factors as well, thought this was one of the better trial read novels this time round, it's not, go read the world's best martial artist one.
The character of the MC is shown clearly in the first few chapters of the story, but before the cliche of the cool and emotionless guy in a high school gets old, the plot starts and the gods sh*t on everything.The premise of the story in attractive: a world abandoned by the gods, leaving the humans to face ragnarok alone. Sounds bleak. This reader hopes that if humanity prevails there should be some kind of reward, like the one who stopped it becoming the One True God and not letting all the others back in because of their cowardice, the assh*les. The action is fast-paced, the MC is a wank fantasy, there are monsters everywhere. What is not to like? The grammar is fine, and writing style can come with experience.The story has potential and is stepping along nicely. I hope it lives up to the excellent beginning.Keep up the good work, author!
Interesting synopsis, looking forward the story with high hopes. I hope plot twist would be super amazing as the story keep developing by.
The battles of World War I have all been signified by the intense bloodshed and brutal fighting which took place. The Battle of the Somme had become notorious for the heavy death toll on both sides, and the Third Battle of Ypres (Passchendaele) for how the commanding officers paid no attention to the lives of their men. However, the most suitable battle for opting out is the Second Battle of Ypres, for the mental effects of the first German use of chemical weapons, the exposed positions of units placed in Ypres, and most importantly, the complete lack of prior Canadian participation in the war on such large scales. During the opening days of the battle, the German Army tested out their new weapon, Chlorine Gas, on the opposing side. The lethal gas formed hydrochloric acid with water from the airways of its victims, causing intense burning and eventually death due to its corrosive properties to living tissue. If a person survives the initial attack, they are susceptible to long-term complications caused by acute lung damage, especially in those who smoke. Compared to the other battles given, Second Ypres was unique in its use of chemical weapons. However, even if the soldier in question (SOL-X for short), had prior knowledge of the attack and brought precautionary measures, his mates in the trenches did not, and after the attack, the high levels of suffering would damage SOL-X’s mental health for years after the war.A second reason for SOL-X to opt out of this battle is the exposed position of Allied troops in Ypres. The battle took place in a huge salient that was surrounded by German forces from three sides, and, noting the fate of the defenders in Soviet salients during Operation Barbarossa, wasn’t a safe position for the allies. The bulge was surrounded on all sides by the Germans, except on the west. As a result, they were at constant risk of encirclement, and a breach in the front could lead to the liquidation of all allied corps in the area. This will create immense psychological pressure on SOL-X, and will likely result in severe trauma on SOL-X.The third and most important reason is the utter and complete inexperience of the Canadian troops at the Second Battle of Ypres. It was the first battle the Canadians fought in on such a large scale, and casualties during the battle were high. Most men weren’t prepared for the horrors of the trenches and the intensity of enemy attacks. As a result, many lives were claimed by the landmines and enemy snipers. If we assume that SOL-X has prior knowledge of the positions of enemy sniper posts and mines, and the next operations by the German High Command, the Allied commanders do not. As a result, SOL-X will have a high chance of death during the ‘human-wave’ attacks, from enemy bullets or even friendly fire. Also, his trench mates would be inexperienced against the assaulting enemies, and that adds even more to the already significant probability of SOL-X not surviving the war.To sum up the previous three paragraphs, the soldier in question should opt out from the Second Battle of Ypres, despite the horrors brought on by the Battle of the Somme and Third Ypres, due to the gas attacks, exposed Allied positions, and the inexperience of the Canadian troops. I think SOL-X would make the same choice with his 100% perfect calculation chip 9000’s.
I'm told that this book is one with great potential. With a drama that has already been adapted. It has everything I love with politics and action. But just, why won't it update?
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
This review is at chapter 80:So my gripes are similar to the others you see in the reciews, but I have a slightly different take. At chapter 25 or 26 the MCs intelligence for some reason takes a steep decline out of literally nowhere. From a veteran gamer who hoards loot just incase he can sell it, to an idiot who questions why his companion brings him an item he can sell, whilst he carries around a pack full of starter grade junk for that exact purpose. My issue isn't the stupidity, as I like character development, it's the reasoning. The author obviously knows the MC is acting stupid, as he had his companion call him out directly for it by having her tell him to pay attention when he is told something and to think for himself. I simply find myself questioning, who is the author trying to develop/write for in this situation? It makes the MC seem mentally disabled, makes the companion seem like she nonstop complains, annoys the reader, and makes the author look like they can't write a decent character. I've found myself letting it audible sighs while reading.All this being said, it's not enough to ruin the story for me, but I know it can for some which is why I explained so much. I see the potential and have heard it gets better soon, so I'll keep reading as most of the other stuff in the novel is quite good and leaves me wanting to see more.
i really like it
Fantastic reading. Can’t put it down. Great work author. Can’t wait for more ...
woow...such a strong start! i can't wait for next chapters...sure gonna be another great book from one of my favorite authors ...️
Cool story author! You did a good job this! Way to go!
Great book! Author updates the most I have ever seen! Can’t wait to keep reading! ...️