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But now they had to deal with the target's inexplicable ability to make an army from nothing. First thing to do was to restrict the area of operations to a manageable size to make large armies untenable. That was what Riku and Rookie were doing.
does any one know wheres the part of last in manwa?
An amazing and intrigueing start for a novel. Keep going, can't wait for more updates.
The writing quality is smooth and engaging, it's a very good read! The author updates enough to keep things moving, and the story's development is perfectly paced and sensical. Character design...I want to see more and more of Sia, I hope there's a lot a lot of chapters to come. Sia is like an accidental but still somehow kickbutt hero. It's an interesting way to have a character, and the author pulls it off flawlessly. I'd give Character Design 10 stars if I could. World Background is good too, I gave it 4 out of 5 because I know there's still more development to be done. It's a really good read overall, if you're looking for a story like suede, this is the one.
Awesome book so far I like the change of pace with him bringing nothing but some computer knowledge back from the future no golden finger special ability or system just straight brains and memory.
Great novel, keep it up, its something new which is greatly appreciated.The characters are interesting and it has a decent world building.
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The author has quite the imagination and thus, can creates a lot of different plots, settings and characters. Each of her stories reflect a will to make bew universes to explore. Dialogues could be better, but she already know how to make characters interract efficiently with each other.However, chapters deserve to be more lengthy, as numerous actions/events are barely mentioned and never sought upon in detail. Other mistakes are mostly English languages ones, so if you see some, leave a comment for the author to improve!
The story is fast paced and skips over the unnecessary details. Overall, despite it being the stereotypical martial arts story, it was a pleasant read and I recommend it.
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Story is a very climactic story and looks very promising for the future of this story. Has very good character design and story development. I look forward to reading more when updated!
