i will say that this is a nice twist to the normal vrmmo or dude just being a necromancer, the world building is nice and well thought of, and the characters are really great, even tho I hated some of them in the beginning such as van but they quickly grew on me
It's a pretty interesting novel, give a chance! Oh I also posted this review just for the daily exp! But i was serious about the novel. Have a great day! (now I'll just start to type some dots to get the minimum 140 characters,so you should stop read this!)....................................................................................................................................
5/5I'm at 75th chp.This is too good. This is how a true clever protagonist acts. As a request to the author, please make sure to extend the story a little, after you deal with Dumbledore, Weasley, and Voldemort arcs. I just don't want the story to end till the protagonist achieves something drastic in the magic side of the world.Thankyou for the amazing story.
It's the second webnovel I read from I_Cook and its work of art once again. It's really easy to immerse yourself while reading; language and vocabulary used are superb, grammar is on point without mistakes and story just flow.Pacing is stable throughout the chapters so far (up to 141), no plot holes or too obvious plot armor and yeah ofc mc got good stuff, skills etc- look at the tags, he is supposed to be strong and op.I like that romance just happend without NTR or some young master lusting over fml for over 40 chapters like in other novels- it's adorable and hits that sweet spot you are craving from romance tag. (possible spoiler- FML is NOT useless ! and is NOT ice user xD) Chemistry between characters is great, dialogues allow to easily differentiate different people talking, with each of them having their own quriks etc; moreover it's not just dialogues, each character feels like real 3d living being and not 2d background character. If I were to point something out then it would be long descriptions to skills, items and whatnot taking a lot of word count, but it's matter of personal preference- some may skip it, some may like it. Personally I like reading these effects, my only worry would be power scaling xD But i strongly believe author will provide and story will continue to slap.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
"Why is that the answer Mat?" asked me.
"C-come on Doc ..!" i got an eletric shock.
"What do I want to create? You better prepare the materials for my masterpiece." With a grinning smile Dark said.
(Shin's POV)
Ok. I'll just drop.. His reasoning is just so stupid.. I'm sure when the plot will start mc will just go to kuoh academy. Then he will help. Rias fight riser then Mc Will kill kokabeil .. And that's it.. This kind of mc is so boring.he trains just to impress some girls. So he can **** them and make them love him..
"I need you! I'll die without you!"
She smiled at me and I blushed. I cleared my throat and look at the sky to hide my face.