Well past the 1st 10 chps it's pretty generic ig , don't mind , I read something similar a while ago , I mean these tropes and ginks r bound to be repeated after all , still pretty fun read
I read some chapters in its original language (italian) and I'm still reading it now. This novel is amazing, you should all really give it a shot.
Horrible translation, unoriginal story, rampant rasicm, and more. Read it if you want to lose all your brain cells Chinese propaganda. L book.
This is way better than I expected. The way the story flows is really nice and how the characters interact and develop their relationship is pretty good, though the romance can feel fast, just remember that he is part demon so it will make sense how the relationships develop. My one issue with this is that it's kinda hard to gauge just how advanced the world is from a technological standpoint, like at one point there was the internet(mass information sharing spell) and laptops that are magical in nature, yet the way that they travel is still with Carriages and Horses (or occasionally dragon carriages). Other than the background being iffy at best, it's a very solid read.
The story is well-written.
But a word of advice from me: Try to edit the dialogue and the paragraphs. So readers won't find it difficult to read.
Overall, it is an amazing novel.
Do check it out!
Keep up the good work author!
I usually don't write reviews. But just copying someone's work isn't particularly a great Idea. It might lead to real issues if they catch you for plagiarism.
So far one of the longest prologue books ever I mean they still haven't even got to the storyline yet it's all the stuff that characters are doing before the story started 20 chapters of prologue so far good writing though and I like the concept if it actually updated more regularly I can find out whether the story is very good or not
my problem with this novel is that the novel has 50% mc pov and 50% other unnecessary detailed story telling,it's just not good with the pacing,so many unnecessary pov killed the joy for me.Otherwise a pretty good story and new ideas.Just the story pacing is too slow for me.
I felt like reading a webtoon while reading this novel. Your story was great. Salute to the author for this great book ❤️
Spoiler!!(I didn't read the tag of spoiler because people no longer read those because of those guys that write nonsense and then put spoiler)
there is 99 out 100 that this novel will become racist also there is this paragraph in this novel that is going to make you laugh.
A secret research institute somewhere in Asia and China.
"I have identified the true identity of the Alchemist Emperor, Li Shengjiang, the founder of a well-known domestic private enterprise."
A piece of information, before everyone's eyes.
After all, Li Shengjiang didn't know how to cover up. There were too many flaws left before, and he also invited a lot of biological experts to help develop Slime's essay on racial evolution.
Not to mention, his time is also very fit, has disappeared for more than five days.
"It's just a pity that he has come out now, otherwise we can let him be inside and help us explore some things..."
The person in charge of the Institute immediately ordered: "Destroy evidence, UU reading ***.uukanshu.com to prevent other foreign criminals from investigating the identity of the Alchemist Emperor and protect his true identity."
"We have contacted, Li Shengjiang expressed his willingness to explain the situation of the different world, indigenous information, local customs and customs, and actually measured physical data, the flow of gravity acceleration..."
"But he said that he would not reveal his core secrets and make it into the core alchemy of "Grantham", and requires us to respect his inventions and intellectual property rights."
Intellectual property in a different world? ?
The person in charge was shocked.
The two world wonders are very strong, but "Grantham" is the strongest. Put on the strength to increase a large realm. The alchemist emperor relies on this rampant world, saying that it is a fake.
"Forget it, don't say it if you don't want to say it. Allow him to retain intellectual property rights! There are no rules that won't make a difference. In China's laws, intellectual property is sacred and inviolable, even if it applies to a different world, we have to look long-term.
The Actual Criminal Who Is Commiting Crimes While Jon Is Currently Occupying Hundreds Of Police All On His Own (Actually Having 100+ Police Him In A Place Like NY Sounds Crazy btw) :
So before I begin this review I want to say a few things.
1. This is my own opinion and feelings on this story as of right now (it may change later).
2. My score is relative to the material on this site (meaning a 5 on webnovel does not equal a 5 on a published book on Amazon).
Review:
It's been a genuinely long time since I've read an original story that has a well crafted setup with an evil protagonist. So when I found this I was naturally quite happy.
Unlike most other originals on this site the author takes care to first introduce you to the MC (who in turn reveals the world to the reader). It's actually quite sad how many authors skip this seemingly insignificant step. With this introduction we begin to build a connection with the protagonist and begin to understand his motives, thoughts and feelings. With this understanding breeds acceptance (and excitement for some select individuals). This makes it much easier for the audience to enjoy and continue on reading even further.
After understanding his motives and thoughts we begin to see the real magic of this story. How the protagonist reacts and deals with the people and circumstances around him. The author conveys this conflict magnificently. The audience anticipates on what will happen next knowing what we know. And then we enjoy the events that happen later as a result of this conflict. To be able to craft such a setup is a rarity not often seen on this site (which is unfortunate).
The reason I will give you on why you should read this story is this (it's simple really).
It's an evil protagonist story that will leave you wanting more. More conflict, more introspection, more murder, more deception, more manipulation, more depravity, more INSANITY.
It's really unfortunate I'm not able to read a chapter every day to satisfy my wants. Oh well I'll find solace in the fact that the one who reads this review and tries this story out for themselves will eventually (if not sooner) turn out just like me...
Overall it's good try it!
Current Score: 4.6