Why is this embarassing story brought up again, the translation is subpar, the mc thought is really confusing, the author is certainly never do even a little it about jellyfish to make a good story, if it's a otherworld jellyfish the mc should know the ordinary jellyfish and how different it is, but the author make it like the jellyfish is the same with one in earth. Make me wonder if there is no one in china with knowledge to comment about this absurtness or the jellyfish in china is different than on other part of the world.
I'm liking the fact that the main character is starting to grow. Not going to lie and say that I was a little off put by how dense the main character was. But the fun this is that the succubus inside her head is doing a good job of steering her where she needs to go. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this pans out.
5 stars.My impression for now is very good. This book is a refreshing and original take on the martial arts genre. I really like the sense of realism I get fromthe plot. I like how the main character focuses on increasing his odds of surviving and doesn't necessarily chose the path expected from a main character. The pace so far is very adequate with no unecessary delays and the story progresses quite rapidly to the cultivation world without seeming rushed.I hope to see more of Formation crafting next !
This week's trial reads are super strange... forging the path, your talent is mine, and super beast tamer all only have 61 chapters in the raw ... with basically no one in china reading them. All of them haven't been updated since 2020-12-03 as well. Strangehttps://book.qidian.com/info/1024631207 -> forging
This novel is good .
World background is awesome,e everything is good too.but i hate the way you handled the villains. They could've served you well if you had used them. But you didn't
This is a modern day reincarnation story with a system that helps our MC gain the love of 7+ women, along with powers and abilities to make him the perfect man. Think "Very Pure and Ambiguous: The Prequel" and you'll get a good idea of what this story is aiming for. Some of the grammar is rough, but the story itself is still understandable. I do feel the urge to post corrections from time to time, but concerns of them being ignored stops me. The world is an alternative Earth where polygamy is legal, but otherwise the world is the same as regular Earth, just some cosmetic changes (one of my favorites is the comment of Einstein being handsome in this world). Just like many Chinese Wuxia stories, there are cultivators, and our MC just happens to be one (thanks to the system)! There are also many of the same Chinese cliches such as Young Masters using goons to attack the MC, and people in authority sucking up to those Young Masters by bullying the MC. Updates are uploaded consistently since the story was first published in April, 2020, and they are of decent length. I feel the story itself has a good pace, with providing a fair amount of information and action without feeling rushed. That being said, at only day 2 it seems the first heroine has/is falling for the MC, while he has a non-7 Maiden also in love with him due to the previous owner of the MC's body. TL;DR : Decent enough modern day harem story, similar in style to "Very Pure and Ambiguous: The Prequel" and "Skirt-Chasing Young Monarch." Somewhat rough grammar, but still readable. I definitely suggest picking this story up if harem's are your thing.
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The theme is good.But the background of character is not developed.story is slow ,but interesting,the picturisation of battles are good.the updates are slow.Nice theme
...I like the book...
Tô gostando muito da história - O MC é um cara bastante calculista e observado- Gostei da parte da diretora jogando sua magia no MC- Não gosto muito da Flora ;-;
Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life.The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter.Good job and keep up the good work.