JetLord004
it's something different. I just felt like I was reading an MTL novel. 60 percent racism, 20 percent misunderstood concepts, 20 percent real novel .
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This story is a true hidden gem, how this is ranked so low is beyond my imagination.
Describing this story in one statement, "an Easter fantasy for readers who have grown out of the Eastern fantasy stories"
There's few things that could be kept on mind while reading the first 50 chapters.
1. our mc is a frog in a well, really just a country bumpkin, his true journey begins at chapter 49 when he obtains a Master.
2. He obtains a ring very early in the story, the ring is powerful artifact and it wants to mold our mc into a worthy successor.
3. Despite his initial limited vision the mc can come up with decent workable(barely) solutions to his problems.
4. After he obtains his ring his first goal is to buy back his confiscated property, ( a true frog in the well ). Admirable but underwhelming but not beyond reason, he is after all merely a frog in a well.
The story really starts opening after chapter 50. As long as the reader keep in mind the above mentioned points it's an endearing read.
good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers
woah it's my first time reading this kind of novel, it's really captivating even though i'm still currently reading this, i can't stop loving it more. everything's so good. i really love it.
I liked the concept, but honestly it makes no sense to put an 8 year old kid. You could have just put 18 year old guy instead of an eight year old and it would have been quite fun. I am also seeing possible signs of grooming and underage love line forming.
There are also some plotholes. The system sign in reward was missed, and there are no details given regarding how some traps were made, and how sometimes, the plot seemed to have jumped past few details.
Unlike what some comments are saying, racism is not shown (at least till ch 40) other than China being where the MC was reincarnated in. But still no clue why the novel was picked with all these possible danger flags.
interesting but nationalism npc opinion and hierarchism... would probably spoil ..............................................................................
this book is very good and very easy to understand, interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow, can't wait to continue reading this book
So far I think Story is Very likeable. I Like the characters relationship between leo puppatier. All the characters of the FloCk are orginal. OnlY thinG thaT needs tO be added is More workD building.
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The overall flow and direction of the story isn't bad, with a little light hearted commentary spicing things up makes it a decent read. Unfortunately the Author has it he'll bent on repeating certain things such as how handsome masculine, or how great the Mc is with women. You will not have more then two chapters before this nonsense starts up again. Alas even all the characters we've been introduced to are female and basically throw themselves at the Mc. I personally do not like harems so this novel isn't for me.
