AmanRaut
I'll be honest it's okay, just okay, however if you are someone who usually reads stories about reincarnation into the past then this story will not make sense to you, I mean the major thing about being born into the past is the information on how to proceed with the present, however in this novel the mc knows little to nothing about the past it's as if it was not his life at all, firstly unless he contributed to a major butterfly effect that caused a huge effect on the events that are to happen of which he did not then this means that the author of this novel is not knowledgeable with things pertaining to time travel, I mean the mc should know the events that are happening around him because he has already experienced them however he does not which means his life has changed, how, what happened that caused this major inconsistency with the the timeline? I mean will start with his first case, he says he heard about it in his previous life that means it was originally not assigned to him, what changed that made him get this new case? We are not shown anything in this story, inconsistency 1. Secondly, he does not know his teammates which means he was not assigned to this team previous or the teammates from the past changed, what exactly is happening here? I mean not unless the mc altered the timeline knowingly which should have been revealed to the readers then the time paradox in this story does not make sense at all. All the events are killing the idea that the mc time traveled which in turn will have a major butterfly effect. The butterfly effect should not have come before even the mc altered the course of time. As such for me who picked up because of the time travel reason, I am completely disappointed in this novel.
The story is pretty cool, the MC has a good inclined personality, The world feels alive and organic if that makes anysense, anyways I recommend this novel.
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
As the creator of the character of Ragnar, I have had somewhat (albeit, not at all that large compared to Cyclxne) of a hand in the creation of this book - but I only chose to do so because of how much potential I saw in it day one. The writing is awesome, the premise is so good I wish I'd come up with it myself. Definitely something I would buy in a bookstore.
TRASH I recommend you to not read this book. It's a copy of of the novel "Online Game: I possess a monster merging simulator". I mean LITERALLY excluding the different names this novel is a copy of "Online Game: I possess a monster merging simulator"
As of right now, the most important thing I can say is “give me more chapters!!!!!” I have not read any of the original source material (raws), but I am enjoying the translation, if not for the slow release. I assume as this is a newbie translator, they aren’t currently able to pump out chapters due to translation speed/real life. They have been very good with grammer and translating into English.
As for the content, I have seen the antagonist vs. protagonist setting before, but this novel makes the MC out to be competent and intellegent (his decision making processes are fairly sound so far). I am curious to see what will happen once he “wins,” but that is for another time.
i am too disappointed mmc os too braindead and story have much more potential to become a better work
hufffff what a waste . . . . . . . . . . .
Mc is Gay.
Yes I hate Gay Mc's and you can't do anything against my Option
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MY EYES, THEY BLEED.
Very enjoyable to read. I don't understand why people trash talked it. It's a clean 'almost' harem without the gushing romance or excess pervertedness. It's comedic with purpose & (prompted) direction.
I hope that it will eventually be picked back up to continue translating. I would happily drop coins on this story.
At first I was skeptical, but after the first chapter I realized this was hilarious.
The part when the main character gives the “dragon” To the officer had me rolling!
I want to know more about his class, so please keep writing!
stI a yrev taerg levon I ton annog eil!
peeK pu eht doog krow!
