"Power of Creation?!" the people present suddenly cried out. "Pavi...Pavilion Master, is this true?" the fifty-year-old man said in a daze.
*CRASH*
After scanning his surroundings, he found an old man lying in the ground. KL guessed this senior was around the age of 80. Nonetheless, he destroyed the house the old man was living in. After a moment thought. Robert announced the results of the healing process.
"Ah- Sorry," The older man stretches his head as he looks sheepily at Jin and Jenna.
"Why did you come here?" He signed.
stop pretending to be me at the commens!!!
I always read translater name wrong Djejejwwjwjwjsqkqkqajjsdjsjssjsossbskwondjsidjjddiodjdhdjodjdjskwijehsjdidhieiddkdidjdidhdidjddjdjjxjsihsjsdjduwinbsudjdihsasssaasassfuckjsjjsjwjjejdbdkdjdhdndjdjxxnd
just what i need. a story of samurai in feudal Japan without reincarnation or system trope.
After 100 chapters novel become very stupid, author is greedy and he's trying to put a lot of stupid things maybe maybe the novel will be longer stupid author stupid author stupid author stupid author stupid author stupid author
I see you have been working hard on the formatting issues. It is reading much better now. There are still a few paragraphs that need your TLC.
Its a defferent kind of world l must say... A Cool one.....Really liked the character development and the story is also nice and fresh....Also l liked the ML most?.... He is totally my type?...All the best author... Keep writting this cool story.... Really hooked me up...
A great novel so far. I will give it enough potential to compare with these gems-My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires and The Conquerors Path. I was sad as I finished all the chapters so far in one go.I will have to now wait. Good job author and I hope to enjoy and finish this journey with you.