GopinathNaik
Oh, so the Main Character of this story is the sects master/leader. He is trying to bring back glory? The Main Character seems to have a weird personality.
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Hope this will get pick
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Hmm nicd story but you should start learning how to translate it in english better. As you can see you're novel is really good and have a potential. Only the translation is really a little unbearable to read. But still the story is good keep up.
A very interesting story, love the humour and the author's ways of writing. It's a different taste but once hooked, you always wait for the update.
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The story is pretty good and I would love to continue it if the grammar hadn't stopped BUGGING ME! I have a bit of OCD so sorry but the story's nice though. I'm dropping it still.
for gender bender fans, this truly was a novel with great potential. it's a shame that this was discontinued. there's only so many good gender bender content and it's a shame that novels with potential are dropped just like that
I'm gonna be shameless and leave a review until I get a rating and don't need this anymore, anyways, the story is as described in the synopsis, also, you might be confused as to why things are unknown even after the prologue, it is intentional M. M is out
this novel may be good but this synopsis doesn't interest me in anything less maybe the spirit soul concept that i believe is similar to douluo dalu ...
one star for being fake like come on with all the bots in the comments.
the book is as mysterious as the title implies. the characters so far look promising and each chapter lives you with more questions than answeredkeep up the good work Author
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