GopinathNaik
It's good. Has Potential but I hope the author will not axe this. The pacing is good. Not slow, not fast either. The world building could be improved.
When update other books? Hmmmmm? Please schemed
I love this book so much. At first I thought Kon was a weird and awkward protagonist but the little sucker grew on me. Now that I’ve caught up I can say this is one of my favorite novels on WebNovel.
Not my cup of tea but it's a good story, the elements were described nicely, and the action is very nice. premise, world were samurai look for power, taming yokai within blades and treating them as their slaves, in hopes to be powerful enough to be Japan's first emperor. If you're looking for a samurai story this is the one, though i can't judge the full thing since its only three chapters, Keep it up author
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
The power scaling isn't super clear and can't really appreciate the difference in power. Perhaps an aux chapter and a chapter that has a little combat. MC doesn't have to be the one to fight
The story is entertaining and got me hooked right away. I'm loving the female lead, and loving even more that it's a dual pov. And Misha MUST grovel for all he's doing, even if it takes time, as soon as he learns about Mia being the pen pal, he'll have to grovel!!! Can't wait for more!
The story has a common beginning but the one thing that got me out of it is the simple that the mc is inconsistent and the plot is all broken how the mc doesn't think that even with him getting beaten to death regularly and everyone he knows KNOWS of this and he doesn't care is the worst part, no empathy or connection to be created with characters like that. (his friend knows because she studies with him and there is a background that makes it obvious and his family once again knows why mc himself spoke with them.)
Shameless review from the author here! I hope everyone enjoys this story! I can't wait to build upon many elements and leave my readers on the edge of their seats! Please reveiw and leave me many fun comments!
I was about to comment on chapter 105, but I wrote so much that I said, 'Forget it, I'll post this as a review.' So here it is...I hate this passive type of protagonist who just waits for the bad guy to make a move. Like, buddy, someone already tried taking your life in the real world, but you're just like, 'Oh, if I see him, I'll kill him,' and that too in-game, not in the real world. He can literally summon the undead lord now hell I believe he can summon his entire 100-man undead army because they are soul-bound or some other reason. But our guy here is just chilling and doing his own thing. The only reason he isn't going to get screwed over is because of the plot armor. I understand the plot armor, but don't rely solely on the idea that just because he is the protagonist, everything will go his way. I do like that, no matter what happens, the MC won't be affected negatively. However, he could plan ahead. He keeps saying many have betrayed humanity, but he doesn't do anything about them. He could have formed a guild with future experts to have better control and suppress the 'evil' guilds. But it's alright if he can become powerful enough alone to dominate his enemies.But I enjoy this novel and its smooth sailing story without any interruptions. So, even though I dislike the MC's passive attitude a bit, I’ll keep reading and hope the author changes his personality.
Oh my god Let's start 10th ?????????It's amazing ,the novel is amazing ??????In my opinion, there is no mistake ??????I can't be bored ?????????????
Shameless author reviewing his own work here! A reader informed me that it would be nice if the readers could suggest which animal or object our Satoshi would be upgrading next and I figured that would be a nice idea! So for this novel, I'll give the readers the power to suggest which object or animal would make its appearance in this parody novel. I will be looking forward to your suggestions and let's have some fun!Also, all your comments, gifts, reviews, power stones will always be super-appreciated! Have a great day!
