not sure would enjoy it...main issue with the story is it let's down expectations Mc is at his lowest abandoned by everyone then suddenly gets a system turns everything around in a month dude is framed for embezzling half a million...but suddenly declared innocent after he pays it?also family interactions are what killed the story for me ...dude initially ignores everyone's calls for a few days..goes home and has a convo..that's it..while it's admirable that there is no rage or angst..dude essentially becomes a doormat..like especially it's a one word apology from his sister who not only publicly verbally abused him..also supported his ex to breakup...then there is the rest of stuff like Zack or mc suddenly doing the chinese street race gig romance with Lila is another bs as it moves too fast like 3 dates in...mc be like no one likes me like Lila. wtf...read if u like slice of life.. no revenge or angst here
worth the read.........................
Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
I am having fun reading it and rooting for the mass release of tonight keep up the good work writer and i want the story to pick the pace a little
Hi! ?? ThePurpleWizard here! So about this novel, Archon OdysseyArchon- god-like beings who rule over their respective realms (yeah, like Genshin Archons)Odyssey- as the name suggests, traveling. Traveling what exactly? well the world, and possibly beyond.(this Universe is made up of many worlds, but I'm not sure if I'll go in that direction for this novel)So basically, the main premise of the novel is about the MC and his companions (and pets) exploring different corners in the world, each with different cultures, biomes and history. Throughout the journey, they'll dig deeper into the lore, uncovering the secrets of the world. Yeah, that's it. Anyways, if you're interested please give it a chance. And don't hesitate to critique. I love critiques. Good and Bad, I accept it all.
the title holds promise. not sure what else to say
For the moment the book look pretty good, im looking forward on reading more chapter specially after seing alex's pov.
A very bold novel, but the writer is a writer beyond the lengths of this platform so this is by far my favorite among her works yet. I will personally be part of Annelise's story. Thank you for being such an inspiration, it speaks from the heart.
This book needs a price tag no way it’s free to read!!!
Kinda like a esper and guide background. No real romance or really even talks of Romance though sadly but it is understood who the main character will romance
pretty good, slow, but gave alot of characters They play a role in the progress of the story, and they are not brain dead
A very interesting story with great characters and interesting settings. The pacing is great and the sentences flow well, conveying the story and the characters aptly. I especially enjoyed the system mechanics and the level grinds and the calm and collected, yet funny MC is always a joy to read. The writing in the earlier chapters could surely use some work, but I took a look at the more recent ones and can say that the quality surely improves! Amazing work!