shove this on the other gender side and from perspective of the fml and u got urself a story......................................................................................................
struggled to make it through the first chapter. this story needs alot of work and needs a over haul on both characters and world view building and development.
I think this novel looks great so far. It let's you know that there is going to be a great story to discover and I can't wait to see more chapters release. The premise of the story is intriguing and I want to see how it unfolds. The only issue is that there are slight grammar mistakes but those can easily be fixed with time, and you can still understand what the author is trying to say. I look forward to more of this book and I hope it'll be more interesting as it develops.
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Story is extremely fragmented, repeated perspective changes that don't really develop the story, repeated memory skips to different times without warning or reason. Trying to read this is like trying to pay attention after taking a heroic dose of mushrooms and you're at the peak.
First thing is that I love the name Jason, other than that the story is overall very good, I enjoyed the first few chapters. if you have sone free time I recommend this story very highly.
A bullied turned predator, huh. I wonder how it will turn out. Read this novel if you want to see the amazing story of Miam. How he rises through the ranks of specie
i was rlly loving it, and just when i was about to purchase the privileges, i opened the chapter 174.. and droped... that was the worst decision i ever saw of an author.. im rlly rlly sad about it and if i could i wold just complain in everysingle fckng chapter trying to change your mind, but i wont use my fastpasses and coins in smthing so stupid.
5 stars until chapter 174, 0 stars after it, i will just give a 2,5
One of the best novels I've read in the recent times. I've read way too many novels to count, probably in between 300-400 and nowadays I'm dropping novels have ways because all the stories seem somewhat familiar to what I've read somewhere. This novel also uses concepts familiar from some of the novels here in Webnovel but what keeps me keep reading it is the authors way of keeping his readers engaging with his way of writing. The world background is also good enough but the only aspect I think the author can focus a bit more are the side characters in his story. The MC's character is well established but some of the other characters he interacts with like Mia, Alex and the guy that's working for him in the tower (don't remember his name). Such characters have a lot of potential and could be developed more so that the readers can empathize with the characters more. Lastly the update stability is really good, from what I noticed the author releases atleast two chapters a day. Overall it's a very good novel.
I recommend this novel.
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