76: Everyone is a shithead. Fuck you, freya
The writing gets better after chapter three. Just push through and you can enjoy the story.
Your book disrupted my life because I couldn't put it down and now I want more. Thank you author for writing this book I can't wait for more and more places for me to put my comments
This is really the very first cultivation novel where MC is neither power hungry nor intent on face slapping nor judgemental of other people. He hasn't even killed anyone! And he never went around stealing stuff while claiming that he was the only good person around.
The most hilarious parts are those where everyone acts like typical cultivation novel people do and then he comes and treats them like an ***** would delusional teenagers.
Like...
Cultivator a: You did not give me face! I will murder you for dishonoring me!
Cultivator b: I won't give in! I will show you the power of whatever sounds mystical and impressive!
MC (slightly annoyed): Brawls are forbidden in the store. Please go outside if you want to fight. If you don't stop you will be stripped and kicked out.
Cultivator a: How dare you! Do you know who I am?
Cultivator b: How dare you ignore this great me? *Tries a surprise attack on C. b*
*C. a dodges and tries to destroy furniture but fails*
Then Whitey strips both and kicks them out while MC goes back to the kitchen to cook for his dog.
Not what I expected but amazing nonetheless.
In fact, it was much better than what I was expecting. It has very interesting things that could all happen.
This is after reading around 46 chapters.
The story is nice and relaxing but after about ch 40, the name of the characters and companies change to weird ones, that three me off, so I dropped it. Example: Battling birds webcast platform became live broadcast of bird fights.
Typical Chinese beta simp doormat, fake harem trash.
The word Cliché is an understatement for this fast as* plot, come on, put some depth into your novel, the only thing that's keeping your novel from being the same as MTL is the decent English, you could have put some time to add depth into your novel, your novels feels like a copy and paste of typical URBAN Chinese novel with the author having patience of a 5 year old, and imagination of a person under a rock, just by having 1 love interest you separate from the other urban novels, by having patience and making it so that he spends his money in a smart way would make your better than others, and by making his system point is converted by spending money with a ratio of 1:10000 and by having plans & goals you will have something to look forward to.
My large saber is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thirst! I like this novel!!
As a fan of MMORPG novel, i am more or less biased toward this novel.
As of now there are only 15 not much can be said.
One thing to note is MC is OP right now. Also pace of this novel is very very fast so it gives little time to get attached to the characters and this world.
NOTE: this review is only up to 15 chapters.
Let me go by saying I love op mcs and love when they're popular when its done right as for this... I tried to call chief and he told me to go away he already knows. Oh and pretty much every high voted comments in the first 50 chapters are all people hatting on the bad writing and plot so thats a thing.
This is a story about a very stereotypical nerd who through the power of plot armor gets verbally s*ucked by every female, teasing girls one second to become a slave through a contract next because a female character talks nice to him, and then throws out his secrets like soup at a soup kitchen.
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So the main character becomes a blacksmith and is given a unbelievably broken ability and class that hes gonna use to become a real life superman. How you say? A magical ring he randomly finds on the ground that lets him go into a vrmmo can take items from in game to the real world. Sound stupid yet? Well dont worry with all the verbal $uck and very bad characters you wont have any idea whose who for a good 70% of all females. Jokes aside he has a entire guild giving him the verbal $uck and i cant tell the diffrence between any of the named ones besides the one that overly $*xualized and 85% of words have all been something about the mc being attractive.
I digress the magic ring has to be upgraded either thru real items or in game items. Yet it can just snatch anything from the mc and force him to be a certain class yet was never given a explanation as to ehy the ring that gives him +20 luck at level 2 A Doesnt make him already super human(seriously he could but 10 lotto tickets and hes gurrented to win but he doesnt) and B why the mc gets stuck in any situation. The mc can literally run 3ms per step. Not second but everytime he moves his legs he jumps 3 meters yet hes as of chapter 58 getting locked down by some thugs who wouldnt be able to touch his coat(yes he has a fat friend but he could easily kill everyone around him by running and punching them in the neck no way he can't destroy everyone present). The next chapter hes being dragged down by 2 idoits and tgeir little sister eho apon seeing the mc has a sploosh as she claims hes KINDA CUTE and fights him. Now because he has SUPERHUMAN SPEED he trips her and could have let her fall cracker her skull but the mc is a good guy(+1) and catches her in the classic kiss pose which she goes in for. Very next chapter mc doesnt run away with his superspeed but some how gotten himself a stalker. Thats where i quit. Mc doesnt like whats going on and can damn near catch a car if he really tries in running but doesnt leave this situation its beyond me
Wow! I love the plot and the world building. The grammar could use a little work, but the story itself is engaging. Roan looks like a very interesting character, with plenty of room for development. Nice work!