This novel is underated. More chapters needed! I don't think you “author” are seriously writing this, but I like how light it is.
So firstly I just wanna state that this is actually a good novel, could even be great. I have issues with a few things though. 1stly too much exposition, way too much exposition. This novel could actually benefit from breaking up and expanding the first few chapters to flush out more intricate details and better character development and such. I feel as though the Author loves this novel and has a great many ideas he wants to implement and it shows by coming off as if he's rushing the development of the story. There's a distinct difference between withholding information and slowly trickling it in after hooking the reader with great action beats and giving information dumps to get critical information out of the way. There are some grammar errors as well as spelling flaws, but by far the biggest issue is the exposition. Sometimes it even rips the reader out of immersion of the story. We gain information that could easily be told to us in more creative ways. Overall the author is creative and even though this is a systems novel, I feel they do a great job of utilizing it as a tool rather than the main focus. The main focus is the world, and there's thought put into this world, which is why the exposition drives me up a wall because you are taking away from truly expanding the beauty of the world. I know this may seem like a rant or bashing but I'm only being tough because you gotta gem here, slow down and polish that baby. If you establish that beginning right all that juicy tid bits i know your rushing to get to will pay off even more.
So i have started this story, and i am not sure if i am willing to put in time to read it.Mainly pointing towards the use of grammar and messy paragraphs all along since the get go.All i can see tho from the reviews, it's super overrated, grammar is leaning towards machine translations, even if it is not. just to put a perspective on it.Main character is quite a fresh thing, not what is usual for mc's to build on, i like the start of the story but. it's a major turn of with the grammar and how quick paced it is. No offence to author.
Okay. I like this so far the plot looks solid and I am curious to see how it unfolds!
Hello everyone! This is an updated review after the novel was out for 6 months by now!I saw a lot of authors writing the pros and cons of their works, So I decided that it is the perfect time to do one for my novel since there is already 300+ chapter available!Pros:>Extensive and fleshed out world background that would let you immerse yourself in the world much smoothly and find the logic in it although it is a piece of fiction!>MC isn't dense, stupid, virgin. He knows his priorities and doesn't chase skirts or risk his life over stupid shit.He is lazy and doesn't like having burdens. However, he is hardworking when it is concerning his strength.He is shameless, an asshole, and a bit of a troll. But, he is serious when he had to.He isn't a white knight neither he plans to be one.>English is not the best but it's not the worst either. I make sure to edit my chapters before releasing them and always check on previous mistakes.>Updates: 2 Chapters every day with a word count ranging from 1600 to 2000.>The First Volume was my 1st ever written volume so it wasn't really the best thing that I have written. But please bear with mistakes you see or the style of writing as from 2nd volume upward, the writing just keeps getting better and better.>Give it until the 2nd volume when he enters the UVR and sees if you like it then or not. **: There are 88 chapters for free to start!>No harem.....Cons:>As I mentioned the first volume was a bit draggy than it should be and the writing wasn't the best in it.>Side Characters: I am trying my best to develop them one by one but I still prefer focusing more on the MC to keep the plot going at a faster pace. So, you can expect not much from them in those 300 chapters. (Drastic changes or something like that.)>No Harem, don't know if it is a con or pro, but I will just put it in both sections.>I have been told that my writing style is quite jarring by some readers, but I will leave you to decide that on your own....That should be it probably? If I missed anything, please write it in the comments, and please do know that I accept criticism with a thick face just make it logical and I will try my best to see what I can do about it.Thank you and I hope you join the journey with me and the rest of my lovely readers <3<3<3(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
Are you sure this is an Original and not a newly translated masterpiece? This was the 1st original works that I've tried and it blew my mind. The MC is witty, charming and brutal all rolled into one. The females are written in a respectable slutty yet innocent way. What i was expecting was a semi ***-addict harem story, yet what was received is a genuine dual cultivation novel that no one knew they were missing. Cant praise the Author enough. This is pure genius! I can see this story going far!!
It's a very good story and I love it.....It updates frequently and it's quite interesting too...I love the way of explaining in this story...overall it's a good story
Still in my heart number 1 don't care what people say. hope you return soon......................................................................
This one honestly deserves a lot more attention , the interactions between the mc and the main girl are entertaining , it's a breath of fresh air from system novels , the plot is well thought out , some might complain about the girl but she's not a tsun tsun and overall quite useful to the mc. The writing quality is good , nothing bothers me till now and the story is interesting and entertaining , overall worth the read
This book is worth the read. I love the plot and twists! Chapter 23! Wow!!!/
amazing book
I’m loving this new take on werewolf stories!