It was from their viewpoint and it most often true that size translated to strength.
Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)
What do I say.... This novel is an absolute BANGER ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) To anyone wondering give it a shot (not a backshot, that's the MC's job lol) This novel's so silly it's so good hahahah
A very good world setting with a great potential but with a dumb MC. No i am not talking about dumb he was in the beginning, no i am talking about how even after his metamorphosis he still remained braindead.
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Great story but I can’t get busy and not stay on the same consistent update schedule. I’ll try my best to fix that. Feel free to get any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism where you see fit. You can get mii your stones if you want but this is still purely for fun entertainment purposes.
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I really love this story so much that I thought I was Joel who happens to face the worse everywhere he goes. Can't wait for the next chapters to be updated
this one of the best novel for sports genre even if it's translated because it's just too good , man keep going ???
The story is interesting, although i would like to have longer chapters. This short chapters gives a feeling of discontinuity in the story. But the Novel has potential and i am curious how the author will continue it.
In my opinion, all the chapters have a unique and interesting idea. The story has creepy factors that make it more intriguing and exciting to read at the same time. The world itself felt quite alive and interesting to explore. The writing style in the story is some of the best writing styles in the book that I ever had and the flow of the story is pretty smooth and clear. The characters are also interesting to explore. Some of the chapters have a very good quality storyline and a unique plot twist.However, some of the chapters in the story have a kind of alright execution and some of the chapter ideas feel kind of bland or the plot twist is pretty expected.I think that's all I had to say about this story and Overall rating, in my opinion for this book is 8.7/10. Keep up a good work
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