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Only read this if you want to lose all of your brain cells.
Written on ch33 it’s a good wn but be really warned it’s depressing as f**k but omg is good but man ordinary human is a depressing story writer tho he is fun and addicting writer please do give it a try and read thro. Maybe you will regret it…
Alright, so first is writing quality. The writing quality here is just amazing, hundreds of times better than most authors on the site. Just truly commendable.Second is stability of updates. I'm forced to give this a 4 because it is still too early to tell if the author will be updating on a regular schedule or not.Next is story development, which is just a bit too slow for me. I don't really know why, it's just slow in the beginning, but I promise it picks up more, so don't think it's that much of a bad thing.Next is story development, which seems really cliche right now. There isn't anything unique yet, so another 4.Finally, world background. Although the world background is really unique on the platform, I think it still needs to be more unique than some mainstream novels, because it seems like you're just replacing one ring with many rings. I'll be waiting for something unique to happen.Overall, a really good novel, would definitely recommend it casually.
This one has beautiful prose style of writing, one chapter just flows into another. There is well built anticipation, well placed descriptions and just the right pitch on royals inner place struggles. Going to the library to be enjoyed at leisure.
One of the best Monster-MC novels. The pacing of the story is very good. I love how the MC evolves not only in body, but also in mind. He slowly starts having individual thoughts.While writing this review, I realized that the author also wrote an overlord FF that happens to be one of my favorite. Hope this story gets even more famous!!
We are not enemies, but friends. We must not be enemies. Though passion may have strained, it must not break our bonds of affection. The mystic chords of memory will swell when again touched, as surely they will be, by the better angels of our nature.
This is a slap-stick comedy about an MC who transmigrates into a wealthy young man's body and gets a system thrown into the mix. In exchange for spending money, he can earn status points, which is great because the host's body has poor health and a tiny dick. The previous owner of the body apparently overcompensated for his miniscule man bits and health problems by spending money to the point of becoming infamous for it.
The setting is straight-forward, and there are no major plot holes. Other characters include the fiancee, who acts as the straight man in their pair, and a financial expert maid/bunny girl. I like the finance expert.
The translations make sense.
Although there are no big errors in this series, it's not all that funny for me either, and entertainment from the MC blowing his money can only last for so many chapters. It's not my cup of tea. HOWEVER, if you like slapstick comedy or are looking for something light to read, then one might work for you.
Well you will see me complain on paragraph but thats only on paragraph this novel is good how do i explain this.hmm.. quite nice to read without having to think that i should drop this because the wounds that are show on novels are really acrute i have experience this sometime fall from big tree or building i hace broken my teeth and i have alot of wounds most novel show it as scars not wounds.
This is a story about a poor delivery boy that got his lucky encounter and become a cultivator in modern society. Unfortunately, even though he gradually becomes rich he keeps going around in shabby clothes driving a 3wheel motorcycle, leading to repeated underestimations and face-slapping. It could be much better, but the author keeps repeating similar encounters and dialogues, thus becoming boring.
So far the story us progessing very well. I have high hopes for it as it is very similar to the world online, but the mc does not start off as already the best and knowing everything that will happen next, but will start off as an ordinary player and progressively getting stronger and stronger, but no big leaps of strength from op hero draws, but from actual achievement and his hard work. Seeing that he is the mc, of course he has a cheat. Not a cheat that ruins the sense of accomplishment, but just op enough that it gives him an edge or more from the other players. So far, because the game itself is isolated to the real world, there aren’t annoying young masters from ancient families that the mc has to beat yet unlike ‘The World Online’ which i appreciate. So the progress players make aren’t just pay to win like other gaming novels and is very enjoyable. So please give it a go so it will be picked up to be translated even further.
I don’t know who is translating this novel but they are doing a very poor job at it. They forget to delete already translated scripts and when they do translate they mess up the names of things or the flow or the words is butchered.An example would be how the changed Constitution to Physical Strength, and Agility to Agile. They already had strength as an attribute why are they trying to confuse readers with two of the same words for different things. Another example is how when explaining that an item would drop on death they said, “a task item that fell 100% dead and could only be taken away alive” also, do they even play games? It’s a quest item not a task item.
What the hell isnt this some knocked out version of Magical Explorer? bruh-Same fucking plot-same fucking characters (mc,heroine,side char.) and their trope but author just changed their names-just added details to prevent from identifying it from the original lol-Changed Tsukoyomi Academy to Amaterasu lol-Mc has the same powers except you made your more opa massive copyright flag right there
