Hi there, readers. Just want to apologize for the delay in the chapters.
I promise to be more frequent till this book ends. Love from, R.A Higheels...️...
Fun story. The only drawback is when the author(s) translate from one language to another names and genders get mixed up and kills the flow of the story. Also timelines and ages get messy too. My only suggestion is to find a proof reader to help. But overall- good story.
if ariel loved Marcus ...how can he love the tormenter Vlad.....just because Marcus died ...no way....he died because of her and she fell in love with his lover's murderer ...wow.. wtf
The author knows how to make people hookup with the updates
After stumbling upon the one-star rating, I decided to give this book a chance and see if the story was truly deserving of such a low score. Upon reading up to Chapter 5, I must say the narrative had an intriguing start, though the translation could benefit from some refinement.
Upon exploring the machine-translated version, I discovered that the story is divided into three parts. The first part, featuring the main couple, was enjoyable. Although it followed a typical plot, what stood out was the lack of misunderstandings between them, which made their relationship quite charming.
However, the second couple in the story didn't quite capture my interest. Their segment felt somewhat平淡, possibly due to the inclusion of a misunderstanding and the protagonist's deceit, which personally didn't resonate with me. Thankfully, their storyline was brief.
To my surprise, the author introduced a third couple towards the end, but their arc was even more concise. Initially, it started with a tragic premise, and while the male character's behavior was unappealing, I was momentarily intrigued. Unfortunately, the final chapter seemed rushed, as it总结 their story in a condensed manner, leaving me rather disappointed.
In the end, I'll give the book three stars, acknowledging that it was an average read, despite its flaws.
Anyone know why this has stopped?
Translation is really bad in the first 20 chapters. Does translation of this get's better later on?
The story of it isn't that masterpiece I think it is more like a 7/10 good but not blowmind. BUT the romance is cute asf 10/10 for the romance(and Dimitri)
Part 1:
I was contemplating on whether I should write a review for this novel or not, but in the end I decided to do it, so here goes nothing.
First things first, this book was absolute garbage up until the 300th chapter or so and I will tell you why. The progression in cultivation levels that the mc went through was absolutely meaningless since he never fought against anyone, for one simple reason: Ling Xi (the higher realm person who gives him his powers at the start).
*There's an enemy approaching that could possibly make the story interesting by introducing real stakes or anything to change up the monotony of the chapters*
MC: ling Xi, suppress this guy for me while I talk to him as if I was the one who had defeated him.
Ling Xi: Okay.
This was legit how the first 300 chapters went with almost no change to the flow of the story the book was taking, what with the s*x scenes and the pure stupidity of the MC and how he deals with different situations.
-dropped at chap 290
-read comment on chap 289 if you're curious why
where is the rest?
man must be tough