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Fully fleshed out world, complex hero, top notch writing, characters that have their own motivations and don't exist just to further the plot. The plot itself seems way more GOTh than the-chosen-one. This book deserves a lot more attention.
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dumb mc, im mad. I really like plant mcs but his novel sucks. the plant might aswell not be the mc, the deer is always in the front seat. novel promised plant mc, but we got an animal instead
MC has everything just fall into place without really needing to try at all. Not much story happening either. If you want mindless reading and you're not worried about how well the story is written then this is worth your time. Who knows the quality might pick up in the later chapters.
so trash the system gives him all his wants. o need spirit stone, o i need spells. ECT i understand him doing some quest or something but too much "coincidences" is not ok. at least have him worki for the wants/ need instead of just handing them out.
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The story concept is amazing I wonder why it is not as famous as the other books. ???? The story itself is so immersive hopefully the author won't drop this and continue writing. I'm not gonna spoil it but you should try reading this amazing masterpiece 10/10(maybe I'm a bit bias since it's the first thing i read here)
Well I got to the chapter that is released for free so I will give an honest criticism about this story.About the world: history has much to explore, since in 39 chapters the protagonist has not yet left his tower to explore and is only aware of practically two races that appeared near his tower.Based on that, history still has a lot to offer and explore.Development of the Story: the protagonist carries with him a tower leveling system (which is not very weak but is also not OP) where practically everything the protagonist will do will revolve around this tower system.The flow of the story progresses very slowly where the problem that the protagonist has with the werewolves in (Chap. 2) has not been even close to solving in (Chap. 39).I believe that the biggest problem in this story is the first 10 chapters where it appears that some details are missing or that something was skipped.Example chapter 1 itselfThe protagonist takes everything as if it were the logic of a game (where it gets to be irritating at a certain point) and also the protagonist's own attitudes are quite questionable. Your decisions and attitude makes you wonder if the protagonist really has an ***** mindset.In short, a cowardly protagonist with a sense of inferiority who apparently never goes to hand his women.2/5 star in character just because of the incompetence of the protagonist.Details aside: the story is from Harem where in 39 cap the protagonist already has 4 girls. The story also has a lottery system (Gacha) very seen in a mobile game so the protagonist must get more allies (girls) from that system.
After reading 4 chapter,i felt so dumb to even click this novel.learn from my mistake...dont waste your time on this trash.mess up stories,mc transmigrate (?),wake up to learn that time slip few hundred years with no panic whatsoever in same day that the game launch,in only God know whos place he woke up.so massed up.
1.is this a big harem? 2.will she guard and protect her harem? 3.does it contain NTR?1.is this a big harem? 2.will she guard and protect her harem? 3.does it contain NTR?
