the story is amazing pls dont stop thi novel midway I want to read this story till end
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So far im really enjoying this novel. the grammar isnt bad and though some earlier chapters may need some editing, i believe over all, its not bad.
The beginning was a bit rushed but if you over look that the slower pace the novel has after the first few chapters is really nice.
The characters arent perfect and they seem pretty human to me. We still havent seen too much developement with danny and ivan but im sure itll come. it is quite early into the novel after all.
The powers are interesting, and its nice to see them not too overpowered right from the beginning. Johnathan may have a very op ability but its good that he has restrictions on it.
Over all, for where it is right now, I believe it deserves 5 stars. however that might change later on so thats when ill do a follow up review.
really liked the cover! it was what caught my attention however the writing didnt really appeal to me. the story was fun to read though. all in all, this isnt a bad story
Good read, hoping for more chapters!......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Average.There many problem in this novel.first: The infinite mana is limited.?wtf.second:He is a simp.I think the author is scared with Shiba tatsuya.First: This is horimiya fanfic.And the Mc is reincarnated as miyamura.but he is a simp with I'm not against of being a simp but this is Horimiya fan fic so why hori.
trash, there's not even a world background explanation the author just dictate there's a game everyone will need to play and that's that.1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
I for one enjoyed it I think you should continue making the book plz I hate how all these people are hating on the book when they probably only got to the first chapter
If theres one thing this author does right its building up a rhetoric with the characters, you actually care and enjoy reading about all of them and their conversations with the MC.
The downside to this is the author sometimes drags on arcs or plot points for far too long, at least in most readers opinions and from my personal viewpoint.
The author seriously drags on the MCs torture/mansion for quite a few chapters, but in exchange it awards us with the feelings of actually caring about the dynamics with Juno, Dinah, Anna, and others. For example we understand why Juno and the MC hate each other to their cores, and the narrative does a very good job reminding us, without being obnoxious.
TLDR I would say this story is very mediocre, the one redeeming feature is the character dynamics and development.
I hope Author finishes this story without a rushed ending and goes on to make an even better one.
**. this story might be harem however every girl except one (stephanie) hates the MC so I cant actually say its harem, at least not for the first 200 chapters. There is quite a few women around the MC, and they might fall in love with him later in the story and/or gradually.
Well this is a novel wrote by a great author and i think there are a lot of people who said things better than i will so i won't bull**** you you have to read this it is a gem
very good I am enjoying the romance. this story has a lot of potential and it is very interesting to see how the MC develops.
I hope that the author continues with good work and only improves.
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