nice Novel Author the story is really refreshing
good job hope to read more of them
Simping for both of them ❤️❤️❤️
Is it Qidian abandoned this WN SOTR? Why is there no updates? Good thing I read Daily updates in WuxiaWorld. The only feature this site feels good to me is that I don't have to click Next every time I finished the chapter. Thumbs Up on that.
I think you should improve your writing, some of your chapter is not that good, and please clarify your story cause sometimes you cant feel the yaoi vibe in their, but over all its okay.
I think your good even though english is not your first langauge.
Continue writing stories.
I read the raws. MC is really foolish (he is a child, so that can be his excuse, but he is supposed to be from a noble family, and they supposedly get good training from childhood). The next things I mention all happen in the first ten chapters, so can't really be considered as spoiler.
He sold all the assets of his family for loaves of bread or small amounts of pocket change. He has a good teacher who helped him in his need, but he neither consults him about his doubts nor asks for advice. He is greedy and easily led into the plans of others who want to use him (the most stupid thing is he wanted to save up food, so he bought lots of bread with his first gold coin, and then was so surprised when the bread got spoiled after a few days. I mean, what do you expect- it's a perishable food- buy rice instead, or wheat, or corn- even foolishness should have its limits).
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
This is a hidden gem. Finally i found another one of these few stories with a proper english sentence structure and properly used grammar!
At the beginning this novel feels like a western fantasy story, where the mc just comes into his power. But this feeling shifts; the novel gets more into the eastern fantasy theme with body cultivation.
Overall it‘s a very good novel: Nice magic and cultivation system, Proper English grammar, nice pacing. Thank you for this great novel.
Good story without system (for me a positive point) good protagonist, my only criticism would be the excessive provocation by the opponent, I know it happens in real life, but it seems like there isn't a game where this doesn't happen and it seems somewhat unrealistic .
This was actual good to read
Just don't drop the series
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I'll give 5 stars as keep up the good work, but seriously give me a chapter flush or something i can't really tell how good this is actually
you had me at Yuri........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Well well well, I discovered this Novel a day ago and how could I express my satisfaction better than just saying that I binged 800 chapters without taking a break? It’s been some time since I felt like reading that much at once. I’ve had an amazing time and can just say that I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Author, thanks for writing this. This story doesn’t get the recognition it deserves by far.
3 chapters in and the smell of chinese nationalists flies. I didn't continue after that. I know what this novel will become. This novel is gonna be serve to an international audience. It is good to appreciate chinese culture and values but to demean others and probably put them in camps and exploit them for free labor is not. In conclusion, I don't recommend this novel. This is just culturally insensitive.