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GAME NOVEL. Title is honest but tag isn’t. Eastern fantasy it says just like the other novel this small batch when both are game novels.
Thanks for wasting my time. Review stands until tag is fixed.
Hope this also helps fellow readers who do not like game novels. Don’t waste your time here.
I absolutely love this book, and I will add them to my collection to follow up. Thank you very much for the wonderful story! The book cover is interesting too! :)
Lol, this is clearly edited mtl, I saw many indications because I'm an mtl reader. Like on top of my head when the translator mistaken "role" for "character", they both have same chinese character and seems like the "translator" missed that and didn't edit it.
Another indication is whenever there were screams and howls they turned into "———!!", that there is because mtl usually ignore whatever it is before the ———, it should probably be like "Ahh———!!" or something like that, didn't check the raw so I could probably wrong about this. The most hilarious mistake was at chapter 37, there's one paragraph left unedited with mtl name Li Jie instead of Lize and Rod instead of Rhode and using the funny mtl grammar, and the cherry on top is a note by editor asking for this Winnie guy to check the paragraph and since the note still in the final product, it's obvious this Winnie guy didn't do his job.
For the story though, it's one of the most interesting transported into game world webnovel I've read (at least until where I am), my only concern is author spend 20% of narratives to describing/glorifying mc, you don't need to repeat dozens of times that mc is strongest guild leader in past life.
I've read some parts of the Novel and the synopsis seems like it takes aspects of many nonhuman novels and it's pretty safe to say with it having a demon king creation system he will eventually end up becoming powerful person now I'll just join the journey as rome was not built in a day a powerful person is also considered in that category you can find out for yourself if you like this novel bye seniors and juniors
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Writing quality could do with a bit of work, especially with punctuation marks and all.
Overall nice one hopefully, it doesn't get dropped.
Tag List:
Urban Fantasy, Action, Grim Reapers, Magic, Grimoire, Ghosts, Dead Souls, Demons, Spirits, Sages, Demi-humans, Hell, Different Realms, Major 1st person POV, MC with judgemental mentality and short temper, Gradual escalation of strength / Power, Non-system/cultivation magic mechanism.
Romance = There is slight romance but it's not a major focus. It's barely hinted at in the initial 3 arcs and even after that, it's a very gradual sort of thing.
Plot Pace = Not going to lie, it is a slow paced story but if you stick with it, I'm sire you'll have fun the whole time. I do add in humour and world exposition and character work to make that slow pace intresting.
This is a planned story. While not every event is planned out, for now the plan is to have 10 arcs, each with around 30-40 chapters (40-50k words per arc). The first two arcs will be set in the real world but after that, the story will take place in other realms.
Please like this review so that others can see the tags! Thank you ^_^
I really enjoy the monster tamer troupe, and I think this novel does a great job of it. The world building is well done, but the MC is a bit stupid in trying to "take responsibilty" for having *** with her while he was drugged.
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From what I’ve read so far this novel seems really interesting. It has a unique premise and honestly I just want this to get selected. This site needs more decent world building novels.
An interesting twist our MC is more of a detective in a wuxia setting. The pacing is a bit slow at first but picks up. Overall an interesting premise.
I was pretty confused with the dialogues of some characters in this novel. This novel has full potential, if the author has someone to proofread his works and help him make the story easy to read. Also there are some aspects in the MC that is lacking, like he is a soldier but the aura he gives off in the first chapters is more like an Isekai MC which he is not. The story could have been perfect if the MC has atleast someone survived with the ship. But still it has a Unique concept 0_0
