The intensity and the build up was better than I imagined... feels like a shonen story so it's gonna be a good read after sommore chaps I hope....
good premise and good writing quality. Pace is fast and it won’t bore you. You can easily see and feel main character’s struggle.
마치 영화를 보는 듯 재미있고 등장인물들의 개성이 뚜렷하고 결투 장면의 표현이 리얼해서깜짝깜짝 놀라게 합니다주인공의 활약이 기대되는 작품입니다.
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Top notch work story is really good, no grammatical errors as far as i can see and the characters have a bit of depth too them
An intriguing start with excellent world-building and a mysterious, powerful artifact that reshapes a kingdom. The action-packed sparring scenes and the tension between Aryan and Darius make this a captivating read for fans of epic fantasy and cultivation.
Your story is beautiful, but you have to make some grammatical adjustments to it, you can learn from it and in the end you will become a good writer ?
Normally i don't review as if i do it's either long winded or oddly short so today, it'll be memey, is good yes? ( yes it's very good you should read it )
i love the way the story started it was catchy also i like the build up of seraphina and ronan it i cant wait to see what happens please authour give me more chapters i would recommend book to any body it was so lovely
Nice story with a bit of grammar mistakes, pretty good plot progress so far with a bit of fillers you might say, but it's still entertaining.
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It a great story the grammar is great but I think it could have a prologue Just saying but it's a great story