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The novel is good! (There were parts where its a bit cringe for me but it's okay) You update daily thank you for that I am a very impatient reader, Good work author
A very nice thing to do for those who wish to become authors. Don't know if this will be read but would you be willing to write on how to start a story? I have the story line all planned out but don't know how to write a starting point. Additional Suggestions for topics:- How to write a filler- How to write a synopsis
Can you give this novel to another translator — who will actually translate and release chapters — or take it off the fucking website. Months and months pass with no chapter update. Wasn’t this supposed to be a professional service ? Well, it’s not professional. Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah Remove the novel or translate it. Remove the novel or translate it. Remove the novel or translate it. Remove the novel or translate it. Remove the novel or translate it. Remove the novel or translate it. Remove the novel or translate it.
This story is about a guy reincarnating as a god of games. His followers gets to have a game system and he is the developer. It's a pretty fun concept but i feel like it could have been executed much better.Don't get me wrong, It's a good read and i would recommend checking it out even if it disapoints a bit. It actually made me buy coins for the first time, as the story is premium from chapter 40.The ting that killed this story for me is the almost complete lack of any character development and they way the author rushes through events. You don't really feel any attachment to any of the characters in the story because they feel bland and boring.Also, none of his followers can die because of the revive system and they only lose experince points when they die, so theres no real risk to anything they do.The translation is pretty good compared to others.Overall i would recommend reading it, as it is kinda fun, but don't spend any coins on it as it will only leave you disapointed in what could have been.
I haven't read much so it may change, but the character interactions and dialogue is absolutely atrocious. I can't stand it anymore. It's plain bad, and I hope it improves later on, because there is a ton of potential in this novel. I really like all the parts where there isn't any interactions with other characters, but it should be that I like all parts of the story, not just a few.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 712thousandRating : 7.6(142)Chapters : 436Status :???? Word count : 1.11millionauthor level : lv5No of works : 2If you are interested my reviews are in almost every novel.
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Chapters are in badly need of proof readingHow webnovel novels have degenerated.................awdqwqrhirheifshfsdifbsifhsofoiw;egfio;wheoifio;ahef;ioahef
Hard to stop reading from the start. The pace sometimes slow sometimes quick. I'm surprised that I found Zuo Mo reference here (World of Cultivation), and turns out, this novel was from the same Author Fang Xiang.Cultivation:Realms of cultivation was a bit blurred here. Technique and the progress to acquire them was told in detail, which I like about the most (same as World of Cultivation).MC:Insanely (shamelessly) greedy just like Zuo Mo. Super genius (in cultivation) but had low talent.Females:Smart, cunning and powerfulPlot:Good intrigue and character developmentPower Ranking:Current ranking doesn't do justice to this good quality novel.tl;drMust READ!
I felt that this story was really subpar in the story, the characters, and the translation. The story isn't horrible but there's nothing that stands out as good. I feel like the main character was behaving uncharacteristically all the time. The character doesn't feel like he grows it feels like he just suddenly changes depending on the when the author, wants not needs, him to be that way. The translation feels like it's put together by multiple random people that don't know English. It's not unreadable but there are inconsistencies that draw you out of the story that's already hard to stay into to begin with.Read it if you're bored but don't expect much from it.
While I may not be the best at this, I think its honestly a very good book to just relax and read with some snacks and a drink in a big comfy chair or your favorite reading spot for a long period of time. It does have some characteristics that at this point are common but it gives it A nice twist that makes it more interesting and even a little spicy depending on what your Interests are. Really hope this gets picked back up, waiting for another update!!!
Love this novel soo much its in my favourite list of novels and I've read 1000s of them so that's saying something Hope you can release more chapters and continue it till the end.
