It is a somewhat nice novel and the concept has an amazing potential if devloped correctly but, the writing make it a bit unpleasant to read. I recommend the author to learn grammar and please use the appropriate time for each sentance.
excellent job author you have created a proper story line with excellent background for the upcoming wars now you just have to make it to the future but am sure you have it covered.
I love it! Sweet and tender with a dash of cuteness. No drama and craziness, just a cute baby with his instant mom getting by with a little help
Wow, after reading, one to two chapters, I really enjoyed the plot and theme, even the synopsis. It is actually a very nice book. And I can't wait to read it all. good luck author
MC is a sucker.
The author is probably a cuckold.
But do give it a try, maybe you too are a disgusting cuckold.
Really do hate the character limit, huh?
The story so far is pretty good and although theres only five chapters it looks like it could become popular but thats in the future.(just dont drop it plz)
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Well...I thought I left a review a year ago or so, i think a little more than a year.This is awesome the interaction between characters are well made, and personally I like the romance ;).The unique thing that I didn't like is the beta personality of the mc.Is more like a beta japanese mc than an American but if you ignore it it's good.Ps: Author i think it's time to make an actualization to the tags.Ps 2.0: if you want more public you can erase all the chapter and re upload all of them in 1 day
WRITING STYLE: The author’s writing style is impeccable and quite good. The story is well written, can be easily understood, and is not as confusing as the story goes. Although there may be negligible errors that I have seen, they haven't in any way distracted my attention and immersion in reading. STABILITY OF UPDATES: With the author's current update schedule (4 chapters per week), if the update rate goes up more, I'm sure its readers' anticipation will level up, too. As of now, I think the story is getting better after every chapter. I am just 11 chapters away from the latest chapter which I plan to go through. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The story's pacing, for me, has just the right momentum---not too fast or too slow. The author has taken great consideration in building up this story that it gets more engrossing to read and makes you look forward to the momentous progress of our main character in the story. CHARACTER DESIGN: We have an astute and strong-willed main character here in this story whose progress gets better and more promising in every chapter. Even the side characters being gradually introduced into the fray have their own distinctive roles. WORLD BACKGROUND: The world setting is so descriptively rendered based on the main character's interactions within the game world and with the other game characters, where their respective actions are taking place. This is the second book that I have read in this genre which I am enjoying so far; so keep it up, author. You are absolutely doing a great job.
The translation quality is average. the names get mixed pup and its quite hard to follow pacing.no consistency
Not bad.
I can only rate 2.8 or 3 star.
Novels are meant to be read so, can't help rate it.
Fantasy is good and especially he existed since the creation of all in myth.
This kind of novel is my cup of tea and it is like tasting your favorite tea but the flavor is changed.
Legit one of the most interesting stories to have come across this site. 100% money maker here. I want to say take my money, but QI has a bad track record of approving the good novels for some fucking reason.
Stats aren't that hard to track.... Clearly this novel is popular already.
MC and the world making a interesting premise. It has a little something for everyone, and written well so that everyone can enjoy it.