Author-Kun , I'll give you 1 day to get back from the hiatus if I do not go to hell behind you, until you write a 500 cap of this novel ..* cough * * cough * * (. ✿‿✿.) * ....
Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....
After the free chapters, the translation becomes garbage, especially about the MC. His name and gender keeps changing.like wtf, I've become used to the gender changing sometimes in other novels but even his freaking name changes
I don't mind the fact that this novel is unoriginal. What I do mind is how poorly executed it is. The translations are below average (with a chapter missing at around CH 18) and the lack of care put in the story, characters and worldbuilding doesn't do a good job at selling a compelling anything really.I know what this novel is trying to do. It's trying to be the sort of novel where the reader doesn't need to think too much about the intricacies of the story, characters and world but instead just turn their brain off and enjoy. The sort of novel where the author is almost always making this up on the spot as he writes without thinking ahead much (if at all). That's an ok concept, it's popular and it can be done well.Unfortunately this author just isn't very good at it. The cheat is overpowered but boring and meaningless, theres really nothing enjoyable about this series, it's a struggle to care about any developments in the story or characters. Insultingly soulless, low quality stuff. 1/5.
Why are your updates so slow and it is just downright downer.... i like this novel but the updates and the slow development is just ridiculous that I wanna just drop this... this ain't even a manga where you need to draw hard to make a chapter..... you just need to think and type and it should even take a day or two for a chapter..... just announce that this is drop if you ain't even gonna update once or twice a week
FIRST THING FIRST.!!!!!!! to any one that dont like multiple reincarnation then this is not for you cuz the mc is not the only ibe to reincarnateso with that out of the way this novel is alright not good, bad bad either if im to say 50/50..... the reason for this is i dont like multiple reincarnation novel. sigh... the author should put a multiple rencarnation warning
ok im reading it i have high hopes for this after i read the sypnosis i hope this novel is good and someday become popular
Highly recommend this novel as it is a very fun read. Plus so far it has elements of gaming (without the level system so its not annoying) and focused on warriors, mages, and blacksmithing. And the best part is, apart form the slight choppiness in the first chapter, the rest of the chapter flow smoothly, and the world building is done slowly but at a good pace too so it reads like a western novel at times
*I've written this review after finishing chapter 216.* I really enjoy the world and the idea of the story, but the characters involved ruin it for me. The mc is always saying that he's the strongest and he only uses some percentage of his power and in the next fight, he whines about being powerless. When he was supposed to have shown crazy power in a fight he immediately says that other people are catching up to him. He is also a mixed bag of emotions. One second he says that he doesn't need anyone and he can take on the world by himself and he hates everybody. The next he cries to one of the many ladies that throw themselves at him that he needs love and trust. He literally treats everyone else in the novel like trash and then they all fall in love with him because he's strong even though he is a disgusting, abusive psychopath and they all admit it every so many chapters.Maybe I'm just worked up because chapter 216 brought this to a point for me, but either way, I can't keep reading.
Forgive me if there any mistakes in the review, I'm typing this out on my phone. It appears that the author does not accept constructive criticism?I read until chapter 20; while many others only read a few chapters before reviewing, so I hope you do not attack me for reading only '20' chapters when reviewing.The grammar is subpar, to say the least, but the flow of the story is somewhat understandable and I can vaguely comprehend the general direction of the plot. Furthermore, the characters are like cut out cardboard figures with no real personality; it appears that they exist only to push the plot forward. Writing about a 'billion-year old master' is difficult, to say the least, when reading you somewhat expect for the MC to know of a limitless abundance of skills yet this not shown very well.Are we supposed to expect for the MC to have only been sleeping for most of those years? To even try to believe that is extremely unrealistic and requires a very broad mind from the readers. For a person who is writing to make money, the quality is honestly not high enough. I've read many other originals on the site which have far less publicity than this, yet those stories have a more defined plot and much better grammar/flow. So, I'll try to give my review according to the general system of WN. Writing Quality: 2.5, although the writing/grammar leaves something to be desired; it is somewhat understandable. Stability Of Updates: 5, the updates have been punctual as far as I can see. (Although I'm not sure if the quality has dropped over time as I stopped at C20.)Character Design: This is honestly a 1-1.5 for me, the idea of a 'billion-year-old' master is extremely badly portrayed. My personal feedback is this: Don't bite off more than you can chew, for your type of novel, the MC being designed as a legendary 50-100-year-old genius that once reached the peak would have been much better. Why? This leaves room for error, as it is extremely unbelievable for a billion-year-old monster to know such limited information. Furthermore, the way the MC acts is far too unbefitting of someone that ancient. But if the MC was only 50-100 years old which is still considered an elder in human terms, it allows us to actually have leeway in our mind to believe that the MC is human and can make mistakes; even though he was at the VERY PEAK of the ENTIRE universe in his last life. The side characters that I've seen up to C20 are also extremely plain, they exist solely for the readers to have a 'funny' and 'unreasonable' read when one is drunk and not thinking straight. This is fine for some, but not for me. Story Development: As I've said before, extremely plain where the chapters are spewed out only to be 'there' yet with no essential plot or meaning. 2-2.5. World Background: Although it's not fantastic, there is still a vague world I can picture while reading up to C20. - 2/5Overall, this novel was extremely dull and boring to me which disappointed me greatly due to the number of 5-star-reviews, which made me feel a need to review this novel myself so as to balance it out. This novel's idea even though not crafted very well may appeal to some but not me. (I may have an higher expectation than your average reader which could be because I've been spoiled from the number of good novels — which naturally also includes originals, where the grammar is much better than this story and they also have very well-thought-out plot but have a lower rating/less popularity than this story. This was just my 2 cents on this novel. (I primarily created this since the large number of 5-star reviews did not match the content I expected)
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1First this sound Trash from the description.A drunken gu that evolution to soul reaping gu is just pure stupidy and the sign that this novel would make zero sense ..............