There is no way it’s finished???? Surely not, author please respond, has it really ended, I think your just taking a break because there is no way it just ends like this after all the foreshadowing you have done and hints of future cultivation realms
my favourite completed novel on this site and second only to mother of learning . I read a lot so being my second favourite book is really impressive . the best part about this novel is the character growth and that everyone has a believable motivation. go read it you will not be disappointed .
At first it was interesting but as the Novel goes on it just becomes more and more stupid.Mc and all the other people was such a low IQ that it just makes me feel as if it is to forced.I hope there is a Author with the same Novel idea but takes the Novel more serious
seems good so far. unfortunately the system is unreasonably powerful wich makes it Bland. but whatever.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Boring, dumb, slow, i've read 30 chapters and the mc still doesn't know how to use his powers, i'm guessing his power is to be lucky? but he doesn't really get any lucky breaks and so far we've seen 2 horny guys who've awakened powerful talents hit on his friend(girl) the girl isn't even interested in him and her parents are super powerful, why does he need to save her from horny guys lol also his little sister who's 5'2" at 12 and Super beautiful is a bro-con doesn't help make the story any more interesting, 30 chapters in and all that happened is that he awakened
Disclaimer: I didn't get too far into the novel.With that out of the way...This is a good novel with its potential dragged down by bad (2) technical writing, but the other aspects are passable (3), good (4), or can't be judged from how far I got/great (5).Writing Quality: Lots of grammatical errors and constantly changing pronouns. Sometimes the author even randomly calls the main character by a random name. Update Stability: Self-explanatory Story Development: Decently fast paced so it's not a slog. However, that fast pace makes it so that the events of the story aren't that fleshed out and seems rushed if you're used to longer, more descriptive novels.Character Design: The characters feels a bit flat. Their biggest downfall is that they are coldblooded murderers from the start, with no reaction to kills. However, the author is good at making them recognizable even when they haven't been named.World background: The system is good. I haven't gotten far enough to judge anything so 5 stars.Note: It appears that the GL/Yuri is only temporary before turning straight and het again. The author should comment if I'm wrong.
Mate…..your story isn’t good enough to warrant paying from chapter 9….get over yourself.
So this is just a wuick review for more chapters basically, but I'll just add my opinion and suggestions. So base on the chapters that I have read(until ch. 46), it is going pretty good.Pros1. Great grammar - I can barely spot any mistakes in grammar until ch. 462. Realistic Characters - So the characters in this story has a certain depth to them and has some background of their own, in other words they're not like Passerby 1, 2, 3 or A, B, C3. Good Writting Style - From what I have read, the author's writting is comparable to professional writtersa and is very to understand.4. Simple but Clear Worldbuilding - The world building is decent, but still has flaws(ex. The other source of entertainment like games, sports, and etc. should be more advanced as the entertainment is industry is backwards right? So I think it should not be exactly the same). Overall it's ****** and easy to understand as it is just a bit in the future and the situation is the same except for the entertainment industry.Cons1. The MC's First Life is Just Blank - Until ch. 46 I only noticed a few hints of details regarding his first life and although I think that is not really extremely important to the story, but it helps us to understand the MC and why he became like that. 2. The MC's Personality Might Annoy Some People - From an incident in the hotel manager underestimating him and he fights back by humiliating the manager(the standard plot). In this event he may seem annoying to people as some people see him as too petty(personally I think what he did isn't right, however it is the manager's fault for stepping on his dignity first and probably did it many times as well). Inially the MC just wated to treat his friends to a meal.3. Some Character's Personality Might Seriously Annoy You - So some characters in this story, especially a CERTAIN FAMILY AND A CERTAIN SINGER'S personality would seriosly make you mad like I was UGHHHHHHH!!!=&=¥×#*@£. I was soooo fkin FRUSTRATED.Suggestions: - Tone down the annoyingness of some characters.- Don't put too much THOTS in the story.- No Harem PLEASE!- Try to stay orignal and don't stick too much on cliches.-MOAR CHAPTERS.- Don't be discouraged and stay awesome.P.S. If you actually read that then thanks and congratualtions I guess...
The characters are developing nicely and the world is also slowly changing but not to fast. Soon spelling or grammar errors but over all it’s a good read.
I didn't have much expectations based on the theme, but it really proved me wrong. It was amazing and both character and story development is going at exactly correct pace. love it...
please stop saying lol when they talk. They're not texting its real life. at least do haha. that makes it so much better already.
this was a really good book up until the point that they switch the translator. then it became confusing because they started calling different power realms by different names then they were before