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Well what can I say even though the plot is old and as usual but still the story is a bit interesting. Plot is slow but stable also translation is also good.
I conti8nued to read it and its is great
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The chapters are to long, I have to scroll down for hours just to finish a paragraph. You should reduce at least 69% of the word counting to make it enjoyable.
This book is really well written. The start is unique and what I love is that. The MC has to fight for his things. It's not like his first cheat is the best in the universe.
There are some grammar mistakes but nothing proofreading can't fix.
Although the capitalization of letters can be a bit annoying
Great story keep it up.
well.. this did start off as a good novel but after 40 it just starts going downhill real quick.. author fails to keep up quality it's really sad how this went from 100 to 0 real quick..dumb MC..useless characters poor background the author just starts making everyone dumb?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️
The story has an inviting synopsis, and the first two chapters were captivating, although there are some places I feel like the writer didn't adequately elucidate for the right perceptibility, I do like the writer's creativity l just feel that the writer should seek out more of that originality.
What makes this manga good to me is that the main character doesn't start overly OP. The griffin helps the story out by being a good partner instead of another love interest as well as, he makes the manga more light-hearted. Finally the main love interest is someone who won't be another damsel in Distress.
I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes.Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.
It's a good book to read has good characters but Author needs to improve writing quality of book. ....................... ...........
