Some equipment types i don't understand, like type 1 tank, type 2 tank, type 3 tank, and so on.
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: WQ- could be better, keep working on it.;,;. SoU- no complaints here.;,;. SD- What story development, I mean, there is a little bit, but it is mostly an information dump... CD- well, you have given the MC a lot of design, but lack when it comes to other characters, they almost don't exist... WB- did it with an information dump, but definitely covered it fully.;,;.Positive Feedback: Good job on your world background and keeping your story updated at a constant pace... you told your readers before hiatus too, so good on you.;,;.Personal Feedback: I think this is a decent foundation to a story, but it would have been if you wrote all of this information down near the beginning for yourself, and slowly explained it through the story.;,;. I apologize, but I will not be continuing your story... for the sake of those who enjoy it, I hope you continue until it is finished.;,;.Scores: WQ 4/5 SoU 5/5 SD 1/5 CD 3/5 WB 5/5 total 3.6/5
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A really well done story so far!The descriptions are vivid and flow well together with the main text, the characters are interesting and believable, and the storyline keeps me wanting to turn the chapter to read more. The prose is finely woven, and this is a read definitely worth checking out!Good luck and keep up the good work.
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I find this story humorous and a great break from working very hard and serious all the time. It makes me laugh. I laugh even more at the comments. I feel sorry for all the female readers who come for romance or a strong female lead only to find the cover misleading them as Master Rabbinkn and Trevon McArthur are definitely neither. The only thing that could top this is if Trevon wrote the same events from his point of view.
I'm disappointed to see this one go, it was and had potential. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is by far the most original setting so far that I've seen on this site. The story is well written and uses its unique setting to add something new to the main plot.
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A post-apocalyptic Isekai story with the classic system is nothing less of intriguing! The story elements is there, but the writing needs a bit of improvement as some phrases were a bit convoluted and the tenses got mixed-up. Other than that, this definitely get's a place in my library! An amusin read!