This novel is really intresting at the first chapter, the first scene take place in some sort of a bar it did gave me some wild west vibes except no shootouts, when it comes to the fight a scene the writing is very discriptive to say the least.
overall this got me hook.
A beautiful book . Quite a different concept .Great going author . Really loved the book . ❤️
Great job author, interesting plot, I just started reading and I'm liking it so far, it just needs a little bit of editing and you are good to go. keep up the good work.
All Hail To The Motherland! May she prosper free and strong from all adversary!
I just love this story ... Please please please update next chapter as soon as possible.. ^^~
I feel like I kinda fell in love with aika even if she is just a novel character haha ❤ I want to know what's next going to happen in her life ..so please update it ^^~
You have a great start and draft in your novel! I can see the potential it has. One thing though, you should probably re-read a few of your chapters as I am noticing a few grammatical errors. Hope to see you continuing to write in the future!
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are there ant more chapters coming out I can't wait for more
One of the most interesting book i ve ever read. 3d characters,amazing plot , indepth world building, no youngmasters and cck suckin bitches and finally a cunning mc in flesh ,not like the ****tynovels who start with saying smart mc but being an ass later . The only thing i feel it lack is the character interaction between mc and the lover. Relationship is a give and take thingy. Until now i ve only seen mc giving and caring while alina being a ***** many times, maybe it will change. Overall its goddamn good!!!!
(Only a few chapters in)Writing: You can understand what is written, but there are a few grammar mistakes from time to time.Story: As of now, information about the world, power system and the likes are being relayed to us, however there is that particular mystery vibe which I like.Character, World, Updates: Nothing to critize there :)I may sound very negative at the start of the review, but I enjoy your story very much so keep it up!
Não sei se é permitida a review em outras línguas diferentes da original, porém venho aqui falar o por que você, que fala português, deve ler esta obra. (Tente ler em inglês, não traduza, além de manter a intenção original do autor na tradução, você ainda treina seu inglês, a obra tem uma leitura fácil, leve e imersiva, logo no primeiro capítulo você acaba fascinado com o mundo.)
- Protagonista Ingênuo porém não é irritante, acaba gerando uma sensação de leveza que jamais vi antes em uma webnovel;
- O autor descreve muito bem o mundo;
- Não existem clichês óbvios e jogados na historia a torto e direito;
- O desenvolvimento de personagem é incrível, levando em conta que o protagonista é aleijado desde os 7 anos, tendo pouco conhecimento sobre o mundo. A sensação de descobrir os plots que o autor preparou é maravilhosa;
well ... at this point i can with no guilt say i rather read some chinese bs thats been translated with google translate then this story ... since machinetranslation is atleast not giving me a headache